|Reviews for Among Each Other|
| PKMNMasterRed chapter 1 . 5/28
heh. what a coincidence i just read among the hidden and am in the middle of among the imposters. Good story but i did notice a few things.
1: Jen died in the end of Among the Hidden, but was never buried by her dad, even though he did have the body.
2: Wasn't Luke 12 in Among the Imposters? Yes, I had origanally shipped them, but after she died, I stopped it.
3: I've heard from a friend that Luke dies in the end of Among the Free, so why is he alive AFTER he died?
Other than that, good fanfiction.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
| loststorieshogwartz chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Don't u already have a story that's the same? This has much better grammar though. And how old are Luke & Jen in this story? Plus IDK much about this series, I'm only on the second book. This is nice and please continue it soon.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
I love this one it is awsome and could you please extend it please i love your work
| Bri chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
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| Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Please please write more oh and can some one help me i found a fanfic its kind of like this one but its longer and Jen and Luke become girlfriend/Boyfriend
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Yes a romantic story with Luke and Jen thank you
| The Luke and Jen shipper chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
the person who wrote this fanfiction
This is probaly the cutest fanfiction i have read on here. Make more plz. :D
What, no... They're kids. Plus Luke wouldn't have the balls to ask, ad even if he did, Jen would murder him. And the kids part, would murder both of them. Go fap to your luke/jen porn somewhere else.
| Mankmanmar chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
I personally find this pretty damn adorabal. You should really write more in this. I always supported the Luke/Jen paring, plus Jen was always one of my favorite book characters. Nice job on this. Only thing that bugged me is that Luke is a bit too OOC. He should have been a bit shyer.
| Izzy chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Aww... It's so sweet!
| Exmoorpony chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Above is my fanfiction account name, but I can't submit a review under it because it is a major glitch with my computer or my fanfiction account. This works though.
I don't know how you did it and I don't care. All I can say is I'm ecstatic that you managed to bring Jen back. I hope there'll be more chapters because I'll definitely keep looking. I bawled my eyes out when Jen died and you've brought her back. YAAAAYYY! 'Cause when Jen died, the books just weren't the same. Nina was okay, but not the same as Jen. Jen was plucky and stubborn and just like me. To have her die was like losing a book sister. Again. (As you might have guessed, I get very attached to my book characters.) I hugged the book to comfort Luke and if I printed this story, I'd be hugging it too. That is the highest compliment I can pay you. Your story is officially the greatest for bringing Jen back.
By the way, enjoy my showers of praise. I don't give them often. In other words, normally I don't flip out quite this much. :)
I'll be watching for more chapters. There better be some for me to read. Even if I have to beta read it myself.
| hey chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
they shoulda haad sex, then they wud hav unwanted children!
| ISpyAnApplePie chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Whoa! I never thought that Luke would act like that.
| KailaBrooke chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Great story. I love it. You should add more to it.
| eh-eh.mykal chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
i liked it, but i think you should have added a bit more detail. and there is a bit off OOC-nes that takes away from it. good job though. i like the over-all point.