Reviews for The Hospital
AiryAquarius chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Whoa. That was one *hot* kiss. Poor Inaba, Jin was a bit harsh with him, wasn't he? But it's a happy ending, so I guess it's alright. I am a sucker for tears and sap. Sigh. Good work! I'm off to read the sequel!
JInCombatBoots chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Ahhh I loved it! So intensed and detailed! I love the way you wrote and how you had to geuss what happened next! Please write another chapter!
Saki Toyo chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Hmm...before I start, let me just say that I LOVE your work! *glomp*

Now that I have the courage to write a review...I'll start with saying that you are great at descriptions. I can clearly imagine each scene taking place! And your use of language is awesome too! No grammar or spelling mistakes as far as I can see. :)

Um...this may be a little off-topic, but...oh well. My favourite part is at the end, when Inaba introduces himself. It's just so sweet and innocent!

Right! So...GREAT JOB! I can't wait to read more of your stories!
RainbowMushrooms chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
heehee! It's very nice!

Don't worry! It was popular among us -me- as well!

Great writing!