|Reviews for The Principal's Office|
| Miss Asian chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Wow! I enjoyed every word of it! Great job on the character portrayals. And also it's very well written. :]
| findthewill chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Interesting situation. I particularly liked Esme's shock over Alice's cursing and Carlisle's anger about the book prompted so clearly by his love and support for Jasper. I also like the principal's response at the end when he ernestly hopes the kids aren't in trouble again, apparently so he'll never have to deal with their disturbing parents again.
| Hannai chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
This was good!
You should do another chapter-
perhaps the aftermath when everyone is at home or more from the principal as he notices other strange things.
| DaizyEvans chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
I really liked this. Entertaining all the way through. Thanks! :D
| ivylecat chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Yay! Outsider POVs are my favorite. I really enjoy how you presented everybody through the principal's perspective. I think my favorite was Renesmee's "oh, I'm not in trouble" bit. Nice work!
| Storyteller xx chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
i liked this story a lot!
is there going to be a second chapter to this one?
| KittandChips chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
lol, this was awesome. I loved the way there were things going on beneath the surface during every conversation between Carlisle and the kids. So many things made me smile. I think number one would be Renesmee attending school with her parents - probably every teenagers worst nightmare. Here's a list of all my other lol moments
- Jacob calling Carlisle "Dr. Fang" in front of the principal.
-Emmett claiming he has overactive teenage hormones
- Esme's reaction to Alice's confession. Heh, she totally went 'Mom' on her and Jasper.
Jasper's situation with the book was sad ... poor thing needed a hug! I loved the way Carlisle almost went vampire on the principal because his protective instincts were aroused. Great job!