|Reviews for The Pain We Suffer|
| melanie chapter 43 . 7/31/2015
It was a good story.. :D :D Love it.. :D :D 3 3
| Abby fan chapter 43 . 10/17/2014
it toke me a while to read the hole story but now i finished it
i think its a great story and that youre a great writter
i loved the story and can't wait until the next already
a lot of luck whit writting
| Jo Jo chapter 9 . 10/11/2013
The first few chapters were good. But I stopped liking it when they suddenly skipped to 1 month ahead, but I kept reading hoping it would get better. It didn't. When she finally opened up about the rape her and Gibbs barely reacted. Its been like what 2 months since the rape? She is barely acting like a realistic rape victim. Plus the pregnancy? They are talking about raising it and wanting a boy like really? Most people would immediately get an abortion. Even if she is against abortion why not adoption? This story is so unrealistic.
| abby xxx chapter 43 . 10/2/2013
Lour story is amazing are you going to continue writing :)
| abby xxx chapter 20 . 10/1/2013
your story is great so far and i cant stop reading it because its just drawing me in you are a really good writer and i wish you luck in the future :)
| Rhi smith chapter 43 . 9/26/2013
hi i have read your story all the way through and omg its amazing i would love you to add another story you are amazing
| Sparkle chapter 43 . 6/16/2013
Best story ...EVER!
| Stormygrl0804 chapter 43 . 9/30/2011
Great Story line, love the parts with Kate and Mike. By the sounds of the end of the story, you are leading up to a sequel, look forward to it if you are. Just a quick note on the babies names...Kate's full name was Caitlin Todd, not Kathrine
| Nymphadora-CullenBAU chapter 8 . 5/16/2010
Hey, cool, Criminal Minds reference! Team Reid! Though why Gibbs would talk to another FBI agent other than Fornell is beyond me... But Spence DOES have a way of growing on people! I loved that! :D
| tasha rumgay chapter 43 . 4/25/2010
hi i'm a big fanof NCIS and LOVE gibbs and abby pairings, tis is one of the best plotted out and thought of story i have read on this site anyone one can clearly see you have workedreally hard on it well done xx
| kaye chapter 18 . 4/13/2010
I enjoy your story line, it is very complex and intriquing. You should however get a beta if you want to get more readers and reviewers. your tenses fluctuate and the technical structuring of your sentences needs help. It makes the reading tough. I am a avid reader & I just mentally change things as I go along, but I'm sure many cannot & give up, which is too bad because it really is a good thought process. Like I said, English just needs help. (oh, and the part with Ziva's "God" being different - the Jewish or Hebrew God is the same as the Christian God, it is Jesus that is just a prophet to them, not God's Son). Keep writing! and Keep working at it!
| STLFAN chapter 43 . 3/10/2010
Excellent work. Thanks so much for this one and I'll definately watch for the sequal.
| beyondwhat-u-see chapter 43 . 3/10/2010
aw its sad that in your story Ducky's mother died and now it happened on the show too :( cant wait for the sequel :)
| badprobiemcgee chapter 43 . 3/9/2010
Aw. So sweet. I love the way that you brought Kate and Mike back there. It was a really great way to end this story. I can't wait to read the next "chapter" in everyone's lives. One question though, have you decided yet if the sequel is gonna be like a Gabby focused fic or Tiva? I'm happy with either one, but just curious as to what to expect. Another thought that just popped to mind is the whole Mike-angel thing. Is he gonna be limited on his visits like Kate was or will it be open ended and will we be seeing him in the sequel? Wow, that was a lot more thinking than I .
| The HongKonger chapter 43 . 3/9/2010
Excellent end. Cannot wait for the sequel. Aww. Why does Kate have to go?