|Reviews for An unexpected trip nowhere|
| Writerandreader chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
This is good but I WANT MORE! Hahahaha
| Swedish girl chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Hey, Can't you write more of this story? ;) Please.
I loved it :D Pretty Please :D
| fang1108 chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
kind of awkward...cant really tell who is saying what...
(" Oh I see how it is. Its alright for you to bitch and complain about having to go to the bathroom but when I need to go its ' oh we just had one a few days ago you can hold it'. I swear next time im not going to say anythin and just pee on you!" I could hear everyone chuckle.)
how could you not hear them chuckle? their all sitting right next to you.
( I heard him chuckle at the comment, I guess he still thought he was bad-ass. I realized we were all pretty much the same as 6 years ago, just all grown up.)
what does that have anything to do with being 'badass'?
(" So Jess, you coming with us on this gay trip?" She nodded her head)
*facepalm* did you really use 'gay' as a adjective?
(" Do you have a cell?" I snorted.)
is this really a snorting matter? i dont think its that funny...
| Psycho Hippie Number Five chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
Good start. Hope this turns out good.
| Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Hey, cool start. Catch ya on the flip side.