Reviews for TO LOVE Ru: RitoLala
The PhantomHokage chapter 5 . 8/26/2009
Another nice chatper it was partly confusing with the disk thing was everything up to the disk thing a dream or something I don't understand that if you can let me know if you can just a bit confused is all
The PhantomHokage chapter 4 . 8/26/2009
Interesting chapter well looks like his sister loves the new him lol
The PhantomHokage chapter 3 . 8/26/2009
Nice chapter I like it and the fact Rito has a tail
The PhantomHokage chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
Another interesting chapter I wonder what King Deviluke did to Rito
The PhantomHokage chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Interesting beginning and for some reason I can partually believe that's how Lala things babies are mad lol
animedude1491 chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
heating up aren't things O_O, whatever happened to racing to the tallest building?
animehearter chapter 6 . 8/6/2009
ha ha ha! i think thats kinda funny please update soon!
FillyDashie chapter 6 . 8/6/2009
there was more then one chapter when she did it ch. 72 & ch. 83 ... anyway you are doing a good job on the story and it is till one of the best storys if ever read
Espada15 chapter 6 . 8/6/2009
Wow man... Great chapter, write more chapters soon...
Knight-Bishop chapter 6 . 8/6/2009
Awsome chapter, cant wait till the next update,

Your fan,

Asha'man of Fire chapter 6 . 8/6/2009
muchbetter with chapter length. its really good so far. the chap your thinking of is 72, page 15/16 on onemanga. and, yeah she does fire a tail beam
Aaron Leach chapter 6 . 8/6/2009
Awesome chapter update soon.
Modify the Lifestream chapter 5 . 7/28/2009 has been a long time coming, waiting for such a fic. there are way to few Lala/Rito fics, so good job on adding one to the masses. Very funny so far and I am highly amused with both lala and Rito. the sex ed classes will send Rito through the roof, (or into bed with Lala- a definit plus.) and giving the little bugger a tail is hilarious. though I wonder if it may be just a sensative as lala's tail, regardless of most devilukeian males not having much in the way of tail sensativity.

possible suggestions-

a possible increase in the chapter length may help this story get out to a broder audience, as I have found to have occured with my own stories, as well as what i read, but its just a suggestion.

keep up the good work, looking forward to the next chapter, regardless of word count.
Elden chapter 5 . 7/25/2009
lol dude, nice. a bit out there, but definitely nice XD Catchin up man, u better watch out XP
FillyDashie chapter 5 . 7/21/2009
awesome story keep it up
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