|Reviews for The On Factor|
| Zaralann chapter 2 . 1/17/2013
| Niky-Slade chapter 2 . 12/30/2012
omg I wonder if kim really did have powers? thius story looks like it would be so cool, I wish you'd continue soon
| fan-rei chapter 2 . 3/16/2012
interresting start. i find your kim a little 'dark' but maybe it's just because of the new power. i understand the need to concentrate on her and ron (after he killed), but i am much more into the weird relationship between shego and drakken.
| koolkame chapter 2 . 8/20/2011
I'm intrigued by what Kim's "power" is and I'm dying to find out when the next chapter is coming. I was also interested in Ron's issues with dealing with having to kill the aliens, it's not really addressed much and wasn't at all in the show. Hope to see some more of this great story soon.
| Darkcrest27 chapter 2 . 6/24/2011
great story is it abandoned? if not i would like to see more
| Madhatterak chapter 2 . 9/30/2010
i see the start of another great epic.
Here's hoping it's not done for years!
| Lex chapter 2 . 6/10/2010
oh please tell me you are going to continue this!
| Jonshine chapter 2 . 5/24/2010
What a great premise, and well-implemented too. Not that I'd expect anything different, given your previous works.
| cutie4lifeand4ever chapter 2 . 4/25/2010
this is really awesome!and it makes actual sense...in a way taken from the actual show...X] really good!i can't wait for the next one!
| riverkirby chapter 2 . 2/13/2010
Man I wanna know what exactly happened inthat pool
| zzz0099 chapter 2 . 1/27/2010
dud realy hate ron in this chapter
but please more
| JEGO chapter 2 . 1/23/2010
nice work want more though plz
| Azulera chapter 2 . 10/18/2009
What on earth kind of powers could Kim possibly have? 0.o Hm...
Whatever it is, I look forward to find out. 8D
| Storm Warning chapter 2 . 10/12/2009
Thanks for the update! Completely forgot this story till now. Love it! Update!
| zzzoo99 chapter 2 . 10/12/2009
i so hate kim in this chapter
por shego i love her love her very match very match