|Reviews for Banora White and Nibel Red|
| Kakurosu chapter 9 . 11/14/2013
oh no not Vinnies father that is so cruel -
everything going wrong seems to have started somewhere because of Vinnie -
its not fair...
| whiteRaevyn chapter 9 . 1/25/2010
it was very interesting. not what i was expecting that's for sure.
| Kailyn625 chapter 9 . 1/18/2010
lol bout time you jerk.
seriously, i love how you work. Now if we can only get ch 1 of KH done...
| NinjaSheik chapter 9 . 1/17/2010
AWESOME~! UPDATE SOON~!
| Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 9 . 1/16/2010
BANDA BAN, PRETTY GOOD, NOT BAD AT ALL. REMINDS ME THE FIRST TIME I STARTED, OF COURSE YOU HAVE BETTER GRAMMER. I THINK I'LL KEEP MY EYE ON THIS, AS LONG AS YOU'RE NOT LEADING THIS FIC INTO A TRAGIC ENDING, AND YOU DROWN THAT SHE DEVIL MIRIMU IN HOLY WATER AT SOME POINT,
| Kurogane7 chapter 9 . 1/16/2010
"Hell, it's about time..." -Tychus Findlay
I was beginning to worry that you would not update at all...well, now we know what Grimoire is planning, but what will happen when Vincent sees his father again...and it also makes me wonder what sort of a relationship he had with his dad. Do keep it up, would you kindly?
| CupofTeaforAliceandHatter chapter 9 . 1/16/2010
| whiteRaevyn chapter 8 . 11/13/2009
still wish i knew who was behind all of this. and i hope you're right about the length of the next chapter, love to read longish chapters, (typing them is another matter all together). can't wait to find out what happens. you have a way of adding alot of suspence! it's great!
| CupofTeaforAliceandHatter chapter 8 . 11/3/2009
I like this so far.
| Relax chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
The writings not fantastic, but not bad enough to drive me off either, so as long as there's some improvement later on i'm stickin around to see where this goes.
| serenbach chapter 8 . 10/30/2009
Aw, poor Yuffie. And typical Vinnie, blaming himself. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
| Kailyn625 chapter 8 . 10/29/2009
for courtesy i shall hold my tounge until the next chapter comes out.
| Ski October chapter 8 . 10/29/2009
Way too short Billy!
But very interesting.
I wish I was a ninja, I would beat that evil woman into next Thursday!
| Kurogane7 chapter 8 . 10/29/2009
Finally...I was starving for details...makes me wonder what questions Vincent has in the future. Keep it up would you kindly? You've sated my hunger for now.
| serenbach chapter 7 . 10/9/2009
Wow, this story has kept me up reading far too late- but it's worth it! I love the interactions between the charcters, and I like what you've done with Deepground and Genesis. Jealous Yuffie was pretty adorable as well. I cna't wait to see where you take it from here. :)