|Reviews for Mayhem Abounding|
| MinkyT chapter 6 . 4/3/2011
Well I was going to read all the current chapters before reviewing but this one was just so darned good I had to put hand to keyboard!
Loving loving LOVING the goblins in all their crazy glory, breathlessly awaiting every bit of JS interaction and just generally adoring the pacy, smart funny writing. Wonderful stuff!
The mental image of Ziggy and Sarah all kitted out to do battle with a beglittered bedroom is one that will have me smiling for a ling while. And I am SO using the goblins's deep-thinking gesture when I have a tricky bit of cogitating to do - seems eminently sensible to me...
Thanks for a great story so far. On to the next chapter...
| BlossomQuill chapter 12 . 4/2/2011
I am in love with this story! I seriously am amazed at how fanbloodytastic it it! Update soon or I may hAve to bog you! Cat xxxx
| Kagura chapter 12 . 4/2/2011
A Pomeranian? That's not a dog. That's alligator bait.
| Ljuba chapter 12 . 3/31/2011
oh wow...well from where I start?
Yooooooooouuuuuuuuuu updateeeeeeeeee! yeaaaaaaaaaah! ok I'll call back the goblins
So...in order of apparence:
- I love how Denise handled Jeff! pretty cool! And I hope Jeff will make her happy! I'm wondering who send the goblins or orange creatures to him...maybe it was the "now becomed out of control goblins" thing!
- Poor Jareth...hihi is castle and kingdom...
- Ahahah I love those quotes:
"before my stomach and my shunned hormones ganged up, staged a mutiny, and decided to devour Jareth in substitution for actual nutrition."
"The blasted hormones tripled in size and joined with each other to become a randy conglomerate, like a Power Ranger Megazord with a serious grudge against pants" I simply loved Power Rangers when I was little!
- How sweet was the burned Jareth!
And I just love how you describe the love scene (and sex scene too) of the sparkling couple! great great work! You painted them so sweetly and without any vulgarity!
- It made me smile like an idiot when Jareth approached Sarah at the door and spook to the car's boy!
(I really identify myself with Sarah for the car's love!)
- One last thing... you have read the manga "Return to the Labyrinth" where they continue the movie? they had copied you in a way...Sarah will become a writer of children's book! ;-)
- then... please update soon! (even if I don't want this story to end... maybe... a sequel?)
| Surelady chapter 12 . 3/30/2011
Positively marvelous! Loved every frickin syllable of this darling. Even the funny exchange between Jeff and Denis, the latter of which is so cool. Glad she doesn't just let him run rough shod over her. Also LOVED Jareth trying to distract Sarah when she was on the phone. Truth be told, I've been in a similar situation myself (only it wasn't with a smexy Goblin King unfortunately, mores the pity). Also the line: "Sex with Jareth was like riding lightning" may very well be the sexiest line ever in Laby fanfic hehe! And I know I've already said this, at length, but how awesome that you had a review from Mr Randiness himself (loved his nicknames in this). I'm so completely jealous ;)
| UndergroundDaydreams chapter 12 . 3/28/2011
You nearly killed me with the length of this chapter. Lol. Eh, I would have died happy anyway. ;)
You know, I liked the Jeff parts of this chapter. I was pretty hard on him before, and he's not completely redeemed from being a man, but it was nice to see that glimpse of the rake actually being a real person somewhere deep down inside. I think being rejected is going to be good for him.
I love Mister Puppy, as always. He really needs his own fic. Maybe a little one-shot with Sir D, at the very least?
Lol - Sarah would have been angry with him no matter what he did. It's their thing. But perhaps she may have been a little less tense if he hadn't taken the noble route. ;) But - yay! They're together now! My fangirl heart is happy. I loved the "Say my name like that part". Oh, and the "She didn't honestly think she was going to only once." He's so delightfully cocky. ;)
| The Three March Hares chapter 12 . 3/28/2011
You just made my year. I'm gonna go die happy now and get reincarnated as a house cat with a taste for biting fairies.
| darkbangle chapter 12 . 3/27/2011
*does happy dance* Finally! Who knows how long those two would have continued to dance around each other if it weren't for spilled raviolis. XD I was so happy when I saw that you updated, and now I'm doubly happy with all the smutty goodness. Also, I really do hope Jeff has learned something from all this (as it seems he might have). He certainly isn't a bad guy, but he has been annoyingly stupid at times. Anywho, I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter (can it really be the last? - such a sad thought). Update soon. :)
| Kiruya chapter 12 . 3/27/2011
Loved it! The goblins were too cute and I love the thought of the goblins becoming too much for Jareth to handle.
As to Jeff... I don't know. Maybe it's just my pro-J/S leanings making me prejudiced against him but... Maybe it's his bourgeoisie-esque attitude which offends my Marxist leanings? I never liked that whole "look at how much money I have" attitude. To quote Shania, "that don't impress me much". :-D Ok, ok, enough quotation marks!
Don't know. Can't tell you. But yea, he's slightly creepy to me.
Otherwise, can't wait for more!
| camcalli chapter 12 . 3/27/2011
tWell...whoo hoo and go Sarah! The only thing that would have made it even slightly better would have been if Jeff had been at the door, but I completely understand why you didn't. He's changed and he's moving...very nice and mature, but not nearly as much fun as the man off...
Still congrats on your royal review and excellent job!
| MyraValhallah chapter 12 . 3/27/2011
Awesome chapter, glad to see this story again- Jeff and the Goblin made me laugh; specially when the little pest bit him
Can't wait for more
| Nanenna chapter 12 . 3/26/2011
What a delicious chapter this was! How wonderful to wake up today and find this in my inbox, and then to actually READ it! How delightful! How devious! So at this rate I'm guessing the next chapter deals with the aftermath of the destroyed kingdom and Sarah losing her apartment. But since she gets hot smexy time with King Tight Pants I don't think it's going to much matter.
| Dontgotaclue88 chapter 12 . 3/26/2011
Wow! Loved this chapter! (Had me drooling) lol anyways, looking forward to the next chapter. .~
| insanityfairy chapter 12 . 3/26/2011
*Hoots* *whistles* *cheers* *cat calls*
| CoffeeKris chapter 12 . 3/26/2011
Enjoyed it? I loved it! Any and all future beaus will be directed to this story so that they can get a lesson on how best to seduce me.
I'm proud to be the godmother of this fic and will refrain from locking it up/turning it into things. I will however, spoil it like crazy.
You lied, but it's ok, I forgive you. I myself have been lurking in the shadows of fandom, but it's hard to write anything when I have two ten page seminars to write in a week!
P.S. I got a review from His Royal Glitterness as well, I was tickled pink by it but then I got better and now I'm fleshy coloured again.