Reviews for Horizons
EllaAngel chapter 8 . 6/29/2009
Aw, I'm glad Kakashi is the one to find Naruto and to try to help him - they'll be a lot of help to each other! I really like how you have written Kakashi in his cold, but faltering, demeanor. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Holly Short of the Lep recon chapter 8 . 6/28/2009
thats really good. i love the ending thoughts of sarutobi sensie! great job, and keep up the hard work!
yoko.25 chapter 8 . 6/27/2009
OMG! what a lovely end for this chapter T-T! I loved it X3!

please update soon I cna't wait! n.n
Obelisk of Light chapter 8 . 6/27/2009
Aww, how sweet. Naruto's become completely attached to Kakashi. XD

I think it won't be long before he meets Jiraiya. That'll turn out to be funny, for sure. XDD
slatedfox chapter 8 . 6/27/2009
please update soon
Lady InuIzayoi chapter 8 . 6/27/2009
I loved update soon again.
marc chapter 8 . 6/27/2009
Great chapter, keep up the good work!
Fk306 chapter 8 . 6/27/2009
Have fun in Summer Camp D

I'll subscribe to this story so that I don't miss the updates that I hope will come after your trip 3
Stargazer chapter 8 . 6/27/2009
aw. i am happy there is a happy end to that.
KunochiDreamer chapter 8 . 6/27/2009
Good chapter.
Prescripto13 chapter 8 . 6/27/2009
A good read throughout-nice work!
KaliAnn chapter 8 . 6/27/2009
I loved this chapter. I really liked the part where Naruto panicked and started leaking out the Kyubbi chakra. The way Kakashi is able to calm him down is amazing. I really did like how he tried to make him presentable, but couldn't quite get the clothes. So the Hokage finally sees Naruto again.
I bashed Voldie's head chapter 8 . 6/27/2009
Oh brilliant. I keep trying to find room for constructive criticisms, but it's very hard when the story is so enjoyable that you don't want to change anything

I love the way you describe the character's feelings more thoroughly in italics. It really adds more depth to the story. You're probably the first person I've seen doing this, and it's a brilliant way of catching characters' emotions. I wonder... if one day I decide to use this method, I'll be sure to send you a PM.

I can see a very interesting reunion coming up. Sarutobi must be feeling absolutely horrible at the moment. I keep wondering if you'll allow Naruto to grow up an awesome shinobi or just focus on his childhood with Kakashi. You could do both, of course, but then it's either focusing on family problems or training problems. I think I'd like the fic either way, although I'm a sucker for not-dead-last Naruto stories ;

Well, awaiting your next chapter (have a blueberry cookie to help you write. Those are heavenly XD),

Rakkety Tom chapter 8 . 6/27/2009
I don't think it seemed rushed at all.

Quite a good chapter infact.

Keep it up

- X3K
izzybell117 chapter 8 . 6/26/2009
wow I have been waiting this for years LOL. I really enjoy this chapter and please update very very very soon. Have fun in camp!
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