Reviews for Horizons
Midori chapter 2 . 5/19/2009
hm... I don't say this much but I do like this story. You have a nice style but you need to work on small grammer bits. Remember to re-read it over and over or try reading out loud.

Until next chapter

Midori
Shinouq chapter 2 . 5/19/2009
And the fated meeting!And Kakashi's character was lovely.
Aquila of the Solaris chapter 2 . 5/19/2009
You updated! I love you're style and the way you write Kakashi is in style. Something most people have trouble doing.
geetac chapter 2 . 5/18/2009
I like the chapters for this story and want more.
Winser chapter 2 . 5/18/2009
YES! Brilliant! Fantastico! Continue! Or I shall haunt you for the rest of your days!
Pance chapter 2 . 5/18/2009
Sweet! I'm excited you decided to continue. _

peace out
Calimora chapter 2 . 5/18/2009
Ok - now I like it. Your scene was a tich cliche, but you carried it off with style. I liked Kakashi's internal diologue. Also, three cheers for un-super-woodsman!Naruto.
Castor chapter 2 . 5/18/2009
I knew this would be a good fic! Continue on! I want to know what happens next!
North Caskett chapter 2 . 5/18/2009
Brilliant! It felt really dramatic.
Stargazer chapter 2 . 5/18/2009
o Update moore
Castor chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Promising! Continue soon!
Spork or Foon chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Please do continue this! It holds promise to be great _ Love it so far, hope to see more of it soon.
Calimora chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I haven't got enough yet to say if it sucks or not, but your style is good and I'm intrigued, so please - keep it coming.
KitsuneNaru chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
You better continue because this is interesting. Poor Naruto.
North Caskett chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I love it, there were a few spelling mistakes:

'There’re a million brats in here' should be:

There are a million brats in here or there is a million brats in here.

and

Grumbling, but the sound of footsteps on the wooden floor - this doesn't make sense with the but.

But I think this has a lot of potential and that you should continue.
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