Reviews for Horizons
Moon Dog 05 chapter 8 . 2/8/2014
please update soon this is getting good.
time2read chapter 8 . 1/23/2014
Wow why didn't you continue? this is great stuff!
time2read chapter 6 . 1/23/2014
Love this!;p
time2read chapter 5 . 1/23/2014
haahhahaha "he has a visitor waiting to lecture him on the power of youth" great story so far!
time2read chapter 2 . 1/23/2014
Wow such an awesome beginning! been looking for a fic like this!
icecatfire chapter 8 . 1/3/2014
-_-...of COURSE it would end here. *puppy eyes* please update?
icecatfire chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
keeeeeeeep goooooooooooing
Fruitstogether chapter 8 . 12/25/2013
Clifhanger! Dang nabbit! Amd when it got to the good part too.

Anyway love the story but wish you would contiue it plz?
Sanity Demolisher chapter 8 . 12/15/2013
Interesting story! I'm not sure if you're ever looking to complete this but I'd be interested in seeing where you take it if you do. Either way, thanks for sharing!
Moonttje chapter 8 . 11/18/2013
Uhmm anoo,.. U know summer camp is long over by now,... Ur making us wait longer then u made naruto wait for kakashi to find him after minato's death,... Sooo please find us tooo and continue this amazing storyyyy
Moonttje chapter 5 . 11/18/2013
Mhuauaua the sandaime hokage can be such a bastard,... Poor kakashi with his visiter thats gonna lecture him,...
Empress of the Abyss chapter 8 . 10/28/2013
I love this story! waaaahhhh and you just have to leave us in the worst sort of cliffhanger... *sniffs* oh well but I would just want to say that the way you wrote the feelings around the characters was excellent! *sighs* I just want to say that even though this was short it was a fun ride while it lasted! Thank you so much :)
CosmicEssence chapter 8 . 10/3/2013
nope Gai's not out of character, I don't think. Definitely liking this one and the whole situation and interactions. The business with giving Kakashi the teddy bear an the reasons why were very well done, can easily see a 4yr old thinking the pain would be better if he just lent him the bear, plus it was very adorable. Kakashi's response to the shinobi and seeing Naruto again made me grin and oh yeah the way they ran away with their tails between their legs was amusing. The whole thing, while angsty is also quite cute and personally I cant find much to fault it with. The only thing is if ANBU were looking for Naruto in the 6 months he'd been missing surely they'd have searched the woods? If those 3 chuunin/jounin found him surely the more experienced ANBU would too, if only just a hint, especially since the Kyuubi's apparently been protecting him from wild predators. This feels nearly finished, but isn't quite. Any chance you'll come back and finish it?
Dellishy chapter 8 . 9/8/2013
Sweet, good story.
mndstjohn chapter 8 . 8/30/2013
Good story. Keep up the hard work!
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