i want to see byakuya fuck renji!

Dude, this was an awesome story. Bravo! I've been looking for some good Bleach fanfic recently and this was perfect. Very hot, great job with this, I enjoyed it immensely.

Wow. This was tres sexy, funny and heartwarming. I was captivated from the start. Perfectly written!

so hot! this was really good! i tend to not like AU stories quite as much but this was written so well & their characters were just how i think of them! perfect! except i wish you added renji's time switching after the hotel opening lol you should put it in a little sequel or one shot ;)

I cannot express HOW MUCH I ADORE THIS FIC.
Throughout, I have been mocking (read: admiring) the way you use words, i.e. "little sparkly bits" instead of stars. Really, it's fantastic, and honestly, I can't think of a better way this could have been written.

I was enthralled in the story and I utterly adore the way you somehow made the extremely out of character actions of the characters seem like things they would actually do. I really love your voice and the way I could really get into the story.

I know this probably doesn't matter to you much, but you are one of the best authors I have ever read on this site, and I truly think you could get published. But more than that, you could get published with works actually worth reading, unlike certain popular so-called novels around these days. And if you did publish something this glorious, you can bet I'd hang off of every word.

Thank you for your contributions to this fandom, and even though I don't really like ByaRen or IchiShu, I really enjoyed this. It wasn't about it being this character and that character, but instead was truly just an amazing literary work. And, as a plus, the sex was really, REALLY hot

Let's not deny it. That was hot as hell. My only regret is that we didn't see Renji, hum, taken. But I guess I'll live on. xD

Joke apart, I really liked your story. It was well written, with an actual plot, and... with some smexy Shuuhei in there! *die from a massive nosebleed*

You know what? Forget what I said, everyone was bloody sexy in your fic. *grin*

Anyway, I had a good time reading it. Thanks for writing it! :3

Just wanted to let you know that I'm loving this so far. I like how you write Shuuhei.

Oh! *fangirling so hard right now* Ahh! Love it! :DD I just love this story! You did a good job with it! It was easy to understand, good pacing as in real life pacing, and lots of BYAREN! Ahh! *Contened sigh* I simply love this story. :) Good job!

Let me start positive. You know when Renji lets his hair down occasionally (anime or manga) and he looks super sexy but he is still totally Renji? Yeah.. You did that except with you he never puts his hair back up *fan girl squeal here*.

Rukia seems a might ridiculously stupid, I mean, I always saw her as a down to earth kind of person who knows how to portray herself around different people (when to act out, when to be graceful). She never came off as a genius but here I literally want to smack some sense into her. She reminds me off my teenybopper little cousin who thinks wearing invader zim t-shirts with cheesy smiley face earrings and painted on jeans is high fashion.

Well yeah... thats my opinion, I'm only on chapter two so maybe my judgment on Rukia is a little premature.

just made my day. brilliant !

such a nice, light-hearted story...i love it!

HOTTTT

MAN THAT WAS TOO HOT ALL I COULD WAS SIT THERE AND PANT AND READ FASTER! HOLY MOLEY! I THINK I WANNA GIVE SEXTING A TRY

this is sooooo good i king of feel like a hella perv for acturally wanting to trying out phone sex loool! but reallt this is awesome! props to u!

i absolutely loved this story! its my favorite out of all the renjixbyakuya stories :)