The sheer number of cliches packed in here is nothing short of impressive. And most of the story reads like a barebones plot outline rather than a story.

A good story, but it reads more like an outline of an epic. If you come back to this and spread it out, elaborating more on events, then I think you’ll find that it could easily be one of the best stories on FFN. If you do come back to this to do such a thing, then I wish you luck and look forward to reading what you write.

seriously the Gao'uld threat is gone wtf is with the Asgard charade still being a thing Asgard only made and follow it because they didn't have the ability to help due to the replicator war taking nearly all there war power which is now over. 2. The Asgard made the treaty not the Great Alliance so Harry wouldn't be held to it regardless 3. Anubis has breached the treaty on multiple occasions so its already void. its like this is done to keep the timeline similer. so the charade is no longer needed to be kept up with the Asgardians.

Susan Bones, Hannah Abbots, Daphe Greengrass, Astoria Greengrass, Tracy Davis plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

I like your idea for a story, but the Total lack of conversations makes it a bit tedius at times. Also the constant use of 'Bumbles' while in story telling mode makes it look as if the writer doesn't like him instead of the caracters.
I did like your explanation of what magic is!
(Sorry for the awful spelling, my Phone hates English)

Good Lord! That's way too many names for a single person! It's confusing and off-putting.

Very enjoyable read, thanks!

Adria was one of the "youngest" so I wonder how she ended up the first pregnant?

One issue I can see with the new Jaffa custom of showing the pouch...Harry has healed two Jaffa and they no longer have pouch to show.

Harry should have done something to back feed a virus over the neural link to Thor and wipe the data that Anubis had collected from him.

Because of Harry's intervention they will not learn of the Unas as early.

did Harry capitalize on his losing his virginity and use have any rituals in place? what about rituals of further acts of sex?

The plot, story all that is great! Just one problem is changing of names of Harry from sorcerer to enchanter to other various names u used gets confusing if u use too many names.

I've reached chapter 2 and I'm already getting muddled in my head. So many ways to refer to Harry, couldn't you just have picked one or two and gotten on with it?

Man this story was going so good until u malde it granger centric
I mean teaching her every thing like she is the only witch in the story

While I enjoyed reading what you wrote it was more of a synopsis or summary than a story. I would suggest rewriting it in a manner that shows the reader what is happening. If you do this with dialogue, descriptions of character actions, and their thoughts and you will have a much better and enjoyable story. That said thanks for the good read and a wonderful concept.