Reviews for Balance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I was really hoping for a little more detail on Harry and Sam's fun times in bed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i already like that harry threatened his family to make them behave. |
![]() ![]() good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() how many discriptors of harry are we gonna see in this story |
![]() ![]() This story is so juvenile |
![]() ![]() "... Harry was dragged inside a closet to give Reeta Skeeter an interview. At first she wanted to make him out to be an attention seeker by "confirming" he entered himself in the tournament. He quickly changed her mind by swearing the same oath on his life and magic that he did in the great hall that he didn't enter or ask anybody to for him..." ... Are you retarded or did you just not actually read the books? Reeta Skeeter isn't going to give a single fuck about his oath and would still smear him, hell she'd probably try to claim that Potter somehow found a way to fake magical oaths. |
![]() ![]() "...Harry was dragged inside a closet to give Reeta Skeeter an interview. At first she wanted to make him out to be an attention seeker by "confirming" he entered himself in the tournament. He quickly changed her mind by swearing the same oath on his life and magic that he did in the great hall that he didn't enter or ask anybody to for him..." |
![]() ![]() You need to rewrite this entire story, you're grammar is atrocious and makes the story barely readable. |
![]() ![]() His reasonings for hiding were made irrelevant long ago |
![]() ![]() Author is a sick pedo |
![]() ![]() Authors a ped ? |
![]() ![]() Wtf ? This shit got real dark and nasty ! |
![]() ![]() Ok i like that the mc 's intelligent , but he used fission to get rid of toys ?... thats just BOOOOOM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Salute to Harry's maternal grandfather. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story |