You put the second task before the yule ball

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The sheer number of different descriptors you use for Harry (e.g., “enchanter,” “mage,” “green eyed preteen,” “Potter male,” “Potter heir,” “shapeshifter,” “black haired preteen,” etc.) really detracts from the enjoyability of the story. It’s like you fear using the word “he.”

why would a secrecy maniac like this Harry is, be so open with Hermione and her parents? that is not in character of this Harry.

the yule ball happened before the second task its what was used to determine the "hostage" for all the champions except Fluer cause her date was basically a zombie during the ball so her sister was nabbed instead

sam , l'appeler Harry alors que son identité secrète s'appelle James Evans...

That was a very entertaining and interesting story.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

I was rereading thsi story, and compared with this one the most recent stories somehow are worse. They seem too rushed, or unecessarily OP (One thing is to be Op and cant be defeated, another thing is to have so many different powers that you forget you have them,)

I thank you for the chapter.

I love the concept of the story but sadly it sounds more like a summary of a story, rather than actually being a story. It's the poster child of telling, not showing, which is a real shame

I thank you for the chapter.

I thank you for the chapter.

I thank you for the chapter.

I thank you for the chapter.

I thank you for the chapter.