It was pretty good, some parts seemed a little rushed but it was pretty good

Welp, first chapter was good and then you made what has unfortunately become the classic bullshit move that ruins every f'ing story and gave harry access to a bunch of BS vaults filled with BS item 1/10... moving on to another story which hopefully won't be as idiotic

I think the author spent more time thinking up new and descriptive adjectives for Harry than on the plot. I really hope the whole thing isn’t like this. A few descriptors is fine but this just got ridiculous. What’s wrong with pronouns?

- The Potter heir x13
- The shape shifter x9
- The teleporter x7
- The Potter male x6
- The green eyed youth x5
- The preteen x3
- The messy haired sorcerer x2
- The messy haired preteen x2
- The messy haired youth x2
- The green eyed preteen x2
- The intelligent youth x2
- The youth x2
- The abused shape shifter
- The accomplished survivor
- The boy
- The boy with dark glasses
- The dark haired young boy
- The young child
- The dark haired boy
- The dark haired male
- The injured youth
- The empowered boy
- The sorcerer
- The messy haired adolescent
- The inexperience teleporter
- The shapeshifting Potter preteen
- The empowered youth
- The intelligent and imaginative young man
- The resourceful boy
- The concentrating young man
- The empowered shape shifter
- The mentally determined young man
- The resourceful survivor
- The intuitive preteen
- The growing boy
- The slim youth
- The intelligent messy haired youth
- The resourceful preteen
- The green eyed male
- The curious young man
- The dark haired youth
- The curious youth
- The cautious Potter
- The cautious youth
- The slim Potter
- The young survivor
- The perceptive youth
- The perceptive Potter
- The growing male
- The green eyed young man
- The persevering youth
- The intelligent green eyed Potter heir
- The messy-haired shape shifter
- The young enchanter
- The untrained warlock
- The intelligent young warlock
- The Potter youth
- The enchanter
- The thin enchanter
- The young warlock
- The last Potter
- The young male
- The immensely curious enchanter
- The resourceful son of James and Lily Potter
- The jade orbed intuitive learner

That is every time 'Harry' is called something other than 'Harry' in just this chapter...

Why do you have quote marks in every sentence in your paragraphs? Why do you have no line breaks when switch who says what? Why do you have this formatted in such an awful mess?

This is so dumb lol

You have found ten thousand ways of saying Harry and 99% of them are friking ANNOYING!
stop! just stop!
Saying Harry a few times in a row is FINE!

Finally finished the story, but to be honest i was a bit disappointed, it's mainly skips over much of the interesting parts the MC character is kinda unlikeable

I like the content but the whole calling harry a 1000 different names is kind of annoying. Just pick one.

What the F man? Incest, pedophilia, rape you are all kinds of fun aren't you?! Nevermind the generic harem and bashing certain characters and op boring troupe story, but the fact some readers seem to enjoy this disturbing piece of fanfic is mind boggling. Having the excuse of shape shifting as plausible deniability in excourse in sexuality, they are still just 11 year old kids for F sake. I urge you to really think this through both as a writer and a reader and as a human being, is this morally right?

What this really needs is more harem. Any self respecting metamorph anamagus dragon really needs a harem and photographic memory and a lineage from Merlin and the four founders ... plus maybe an extended shopping trip in Diagon Alley?

Foods you say? What sorts of foods? The most delicious foods!

This story could be interesting but the writing style is irritating. [2-3 word descriptionboy, youth, pre-teen…] gets old fast. There is a lot of tell tell tell and very little “show”

The fact that the Author trys to avoid saying Harry every second sentence is funny at first but gets old fast. After some point it just gets hard to read

Really surprised luna hasn't showed up at all from either him saving her from being mistreated or her having some kind of seer abilities or just being able to see he is different.