Surprised Hermione's parents allowed her to go for the summer like that.

I don't mind an overpowered harry or even him having a harem but it is going to be weird as hell if he ever explains to Samantha that she slept with an eleven year old even if he doesn't look it which is why the lemon should have been shown since he didn't look his age but that is just an opinion. still going to read the story to see how it goes in all along with the sequel.

Finally found this fic of yours that you used as the basis of your other fics. I do find the descriptive language used for Harry a little over the top considering he hasn't enchanted anything/one yet, would be classified more as self-trained or under-trained rather than untrained, and was called a shapeshifter far earlier in the chapter than when you explained his training attempts.
Quite frankly the chapter is somewhat of a mess and simply highlights how far you have come since you created this story.

As a side note, with Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them revealing the existence of blood curses and the creation process of Obscurials, I am surprised no one has made(though I haven't honestly been seeking it out) an Obscurial!Harry. Then again they do separate Fantastic Beasts and the Harry Potter series, so I might find them there instead.

I realise that this is an old story and while I hope your subsequent stories had less note breaks and better written, I'm not interested in the type of multiple crossover fics like you have posted since to be able to read for myself. It was an interesting concept and I wish it didnt fall so flat

I don't know how I finished this story, it was not palatable with alot of telling, unnecessary interruptions

Is the Alteran Civilization Not over a hundred million years old and haven’t they split after 10 to 50 Million years in their Home glaxy?

... so this has the potential to be as awesome fan fic, just needs a lot more depth. dunno if you have done a rewrite already, but if not I say go for it. it's a dann good rough draft, plenty to work with

... this isnt a story, its more like a description of one...

This wasn't a story, it was a synopsis. It was nearly all tell and no show. By the time I reached chapter 10, I was wondering if you were going to write anything worth reading. ow that I've read it all, I'm questioning why I even bothered reading it. The concepts and situations were interesting and you pretty much skipped over letting us (the readers) enjoy them like they should be enjoyed, then made us read a short description paragraph and had us move on. This wasn't writing a story, this was writing a (pretty dry) script summary.

I feel like I've tried reading this story a dozen times because I really like the premise and story line but I can't ever get past the extreme amount of descriptors. There's nothing wrong with saying "he" instead of trying to use a brand new description of Harry every single sentence.

The story is a good idea, but you got some stuff (like the original name of the Alterans and the age of their civilization and the direction of the Tria and such) way wrong. The main trouble with the story, however, is that it doesn't actually read like a story. It reads more like a series of episode summaries. It needs dialogue to humanize the interaction. The ideas and general plot are amazing though, I loved that.

Jesus Christ... the author, story teller, writer, person that types alot, one who writes has issues... rly he is 11 and fucking, he compares another 11 y/o witch he hasnt fucked to a 25 y/o muggle he has... this is just weird. and the writing.. omfg almost every paragraph has atleast 3 sentences that start with a different descriptive word for harry.. and it doesnt stop. then there is the terrible constant use of quotations for every sentence when some1 is talking. just bad bad bad

problems/issues with this chapter...
First off, MC not (mentioning) putting up any protections against his stuff being Scanned. I mean, he specifically mentioned them breaking them open to look at them.
Then there is the MC not putting more defenses on those Ptel injectors/serums. He could/should have been able to do something that would either make them unable to be analyzed or examined.
Lastly would be that it would be kinda dumb for his cars to be self-automated, able to eject passengers, disintegrate itself, or portkey. I mean, no one would ignore that.

Aside from that stuff, I'd have preferred if MC had used the Dark Mark to place those DE spells on ALL the DE's. I mean, they are all connected through that.

Yes, going to read the sequel, then the one not finished, all 113 chapters. But before the sequel, have a few other stories and the last season of GOT on DVD to read/watch!

no mention of them having sec last chapter. In this chapter it is mentioned off-hand like it is something they do all the time. Not a major issue, just one that confuses the story a bit.