so far, Honestly bummed MC has not used the scar's connection to voldie to "drain" his magic, maybe even his knowledge. Aside from that, surprised he did not have sex with hermione or Tonks in his first year. To protect them both from being used in rituals. Rituals they could have used. Also, surprised MC is not attending ALL the classes taught at Uni. I mean, he can have more than one Golem. Also, He can read and learn FAST. so... yeah.
I've read the story before, and am probably just repeating things I have said before. but they are still issues.

This seemed more like an epilogue, than a regular chapter!

[As Harry shook her hand he brought it up to his lips and kissed it. His telepathy couldn't help but pick up her mental shout of "he's British," and her excitement at his accent. "Hello James, just call me Sam." "I would be delighted to show you around town." "I'd be free for dinner tonight if that wouldn't be too soon?" Harry gave her a warm smile and replied, "Not at all Sam." "What time and where can I pick you up?" "How about 7 and at the main gate of the academy," Sam replied with one of the most beautiful smiles Harry had ever witnessed. "I will be there my lady and waiting at 7." Harry gave her a smile and a short bow before turning and exiting the building. Harry again picked up a mental shout of nice bum.]

This? It's wrong. You don't add quotation marks between each sentence in a section of dialogue nor do you put more than one speaker per paragraph... doing both like this makes it even worse because now it looks like the speaker is changing with every sentence. This section SHOULD look like this;

[As Harry shook her hand he brought it up to his lips and kissed it. His telepathy couldn't help but pick up her mental shout of "he's British," and her excitement at his accent. "Hello James, just call me Sam. I would be delighted to show you around town. I'd be free for dinner tonight if that wouldn't be too soon?"

Harry gave her a warm smile and replied, "Not at all Sam. What time and where can I pick you up?"

"How about 7 and at the main gate of the academy," Sam replied with one of the most beautiful smiles Harry had ever witnessed.

"I will be there my lady and waiting at 7." Harry gave her a smile and a short bow before turning and exiting the building. Harry again picked up a mental shout of nice bum.]

still a great story and still one of my faverites but :) if you ever decide to do a rewrite the yule ball was set at christimas and the 2nd task wes set for late february 24th i believe but still great story

Love it. Fun and relaxing read.

hay un exceso de uso de adjetivos que hace más difícil y lenta la lectura, no es necesario darle un adjetivo diferente en cada oración,siempre se le pudo llamar Harry

Every once in a while, I run into one of your stories and think, "I know this writer is absolute trash, but surely it would be a good way to kill a little time to read some of this old cliche bullshit for my own amusement."

Then I start reading your trash writing and remember you are always way worse at writing than I remember you being. Between sexualizing a 10 year old, making a 14 year old a club hopping slut, technically making a grown woman into an unwilling pedophile, and just the awful, dog shit formatting combined with the utter fantasy wank just makes this shit truly putrid.

I mean, you can't help yourself. You have no self-control and zero taste or sense of pacing. "Let's talk about this girl Harry met. She has huge tits. Now let's go on a tangent about how Harry can fuck for as long as he wants, only cums when he wants, and can control his boner. What were we talking about again? Oh yeah, how we turned Amanda Tapping from a modestly endowed woman into a busty blonde with giant tits."

You change everything to align with your weird-ass, random fantasies (Fleur being a "reddish blonde" out of nowhere. That color doesn't even make sense in the first place), and none of it has any real, sensible basis in anything. Like, how does Harry randomly know Death Eater initiation rites? That has nothing to do with the Dark Mark itself and wouldn't be coded into it. That is a social ritual to convince the other Death Eaters and Voldemort that you're "worthy" of the Mark. Like getting jumped into a gang before you're allowed to get gang tattoos.

Harry constantly has knowledge he should have no way of actually knowing, he does things that make no sense just because it's obvious that you (the writer) simply likes those things, and there just so much random shit thrown into the story that will never for a second matter at all. Like all of Harry's vaults and the shit in them, or the "shadow dragon" shit, or Harry randomly having the Sword of Gryffindor turn into Weeb Steel (when would he have ever seen a katana? Or have enjoyed any scifi as he previously mentioned? He's not allowed any TV time and I doubt he's allowed to read for pleasure) based on his "personality" which also makes no sense.

There just so much wrong with this story. So much wasted time and space where you regurgitate random cliches that made your pp hard when you read them in other stories. Then there's your dog-shit formatting with the dialogue. You can't just keep putting new lines of dialogue back to back. That's not how shit works, guy.

Then there's just that obnoxious attempt at avoiding repetition that only serves to make everything sound stupid and awkward where you keep trying to find news ways to describe Harry, to refer to him in the narrative. "The son of Lily and James Potter, blah blah blah." "The shapeshifter, blah blah blah." "The enchanter, blah blah blah."

It's annoying. Also, Harry at this point is most certainly not an enchanter.

I hate writers like you because you turn what could be an interesting idea (Harry Potter x Stargate) into self-satisfactory, masturbatory, boring bullshit that no one but you and the other people like you would truly enjoy. And I feel like it deters people from writing other, more interesting interpretations of the idea because at this point it's "tradition" to make the stories a shit heap with endless unnecessary details and shitty muggle-wank, and let us not forget the strange rush to turn everything sexual. You people have zero patience and always rush things early on when all it does it make the story seem very congested and have awful pacing and there's never, ever, a decent reason for it.

Hell, some stories (this one included in some ways) arbitrarily age Harry so that he can do more "adult" things, then suddenly things start taking years to happen. Like, why not just start the story after Hogwarts when Harry is an adult? It's not like you people ever actually do Hogwarts well and clearly want to just rush past it while mocking wizards because "sci fi is better than fantasy".

Utter wastes of space.

Very enjoyable!

For a first effort I'm giving 85 out of 100. Now it's time to read your next offering.

Jack's dead son and ex-wife need saved for their family.

The way you connect the wizarding world of Harry Potter to the Alterans of Stargate verse is so close, there may only be 5 microns of gap between the two verses.

Fun to play with friends and enemies when powerful smart energy manipulator.

Still enjoying because the Canon Stargate products are so good.

Each season is so amazing.

Harry is Alteran. He's not an Alteran from the treaty. He and his people were 5 million years removed from any galactic empire business.