Reviews for Perfection
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 1 . 9/16/2019
Aww, this was really sweet. Not over the top. Just subtle.
CherryFlamingo chapter 1 . 5/11/2016
That's so sweet and cute. I like the writing style here.
FruitySmell chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
Beautiful, wonderful! I loved it!
BananaBabe903 chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
This was perfect. I love the way you captured Neji's personality perfectly!
Crazycally chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Very cute, and I love how unlike many other oneshots its not rushed. Poor Neji, she laughted in his face, but atleast he got his girl.
Ailish Oriana chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
wow. this is going in my favourites. Incredibly cute! I love how you built up their characters and the ending was just so PERFECT. really. :)
LadyRen5 chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
Such a cute story! I never thought of the love triangle like that, but you are so right! :)
Lotos-Eater chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Good story!
sophia666 chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
oh, I love this. and that last scene, and Neji's nerves and clumsiness with her. and his determination to be with Tenten.
SlimReaper chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
I love this fic! I can just imagine it, Neji so controlled, Tenten making him admit it, Lee probably standing outside monologuing to himself about the Power of Youthful Blossoming Love! Very well done, very well done indeed.
1010'jin chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
I like this. I like how Neji and Tenten do not stray from their usual personalities. I like how Perfection fits them really well-I couldn't imagine it any other way. The ending was what got me, though-the last paragraph. Now that was perfect, for sure. Ha ha, I have to admit I'm slightly in awe of your writing skillage.
Krizzie chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
you wouldn't mind a bit of redundancy, would you? Because this shot is just so perfect. XP
jadedsiren chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Some good tension at the end, great feel in the intro and the middle was had that romantic slightly angsty quiet moment thing going on.

I liked it.
LuvleeCookieChan chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
aw that was cute. Neji really is all 'perfect' or perfectionist. Great story.
Mangafox101 chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
I love this story. If Tenten and Neji werre to get together I think it would go simialr to this. I loved it alot. Please write more Tenten and Neji stories.
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