|Reviews for Worlds Apart, Yet So Close|
| Someonerandom chapter 4 . 5/3
Sakura is a bit too Mary-Sue. In the first chapter, you boosted her bukijutsu skills up to 5 out of 5, instead of the 3 or 2 it should have been. Also, all the Konoha-nin DON'T have as much chakra as Naruto, and seeing how it's 10 S-RANKED ninja against 5 A-Ranked, you've given the Konoha-nins too much stamina, chakra, speed, strength, and talent. One S-Ranked ninja can easily take down 10 A-Ranked. There's a reason that S-Ranks are so feared. Personally, I have nothing against you, but in this story, not only would Sakura have panicked more when she discovered that she wasn't in the same dimension, you've also made her wayyyy to OP and Mary-Sueish. The plot line is good, the characters are OC until the point that they are practically OCs, and you are portraying Sakura as a overpowered, sassy, calm b**ch. Exactly a Mary-Sue. Now, this story is horrible and I cannot even go past the fifth chapter because of how goddamed OP Sakura is.
| Siera-Knightwalker chapter 25 . 9/27/2016
Wait. So Sakura lives in another world which does not have chakra making her the only chakra-using ninja in existence. so light and misa are dead. Legally. And if Sakura has a kid they'll have chakra. And might have L's intellect. God help criminals of the next generation.
| guest chapter 25 . 6/4/2016
Daaaaaawwww I love happy endings. Thx for sharing!
| Guest chapter 25 . 5/30/2016
I love this story very much, thank you so much for the great read!
| SilverRider09 chapter 3 . 1/29/2016
You know, you said that you made Sakura Marysueish, but I think her abilities as you portrayed them to be are perfectly legitimate, seeing as she's a ninja and all. :)
| Rosethorn50 chapter 5 . 10/24/2015
I love this chapter you are keeping the characters in character which is what I like!
| Riddle Wraith chapter 25 . 9/19/2015
Oh my fucking God! I fucking LOVED it! This story has EVERYTHING! The asshole got pointed at and laughed at by the fucking Hokage herself via scroll and then got LEFT BEHIND by a badass who most certainly didn't feel anything for him at that point (serves his psycho, possessive ass right too). THEN said badass wins the day (by literally beating the shit out of two little fuckheads, namely that annoying blonde bitch and "Mr. Perfect"), saves L, saves Watari, and gets her fucking man! Hell fucking yes! This is probably one of the best stories I've ever read. This is most definitely a happy ending if I've ever seen one. Awesome. :)
| cakupg chapter 25 . 7/31/2015
I'd just finished this fanfic and well...I truly loved it! This was amazing. Maybe the only thing I would liked to have read was a more drawn out battle with both Kira and L & Sakura. But, other than that I really liked Sakura's personality, when she gets pissed off when characters like Sasuke or Light screw up.
But, anyways very good and thank you for writing this. :)
| RamenLoverPixie chapter 25 . 7/27/2015
I don't care how may times I read this, I love it! You did an awesome job on this piece of art! Ja Ne~
| miriti1 chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
What a freaking good start :) I love how Sakura is the main character
| Sakura Lawliet chapter 25 . 4/13/2015
This was a wonderful story. I liked it very much. You kept them all in character very well and their was those really good fighting scenes. :) All in all, I was definitely pleased with this stories out-line, story idea/concept, and your writing style. It's hard to find good writers such as yourself without the story-line ending up become a little boring.
I enjoyed this very much and thank you for posting this story,
| dragonzrreal chapter 1 . 3/16/2015
In response to your little blurb at the beginning of this chapter, you are right. Honestly I never really liked the Sakura character from the manga much and I have seen fan fiction authors do a much better job with her character. I haven't even read your story yet and I already know that since you're the author making up this story you have license to do whatever you want with her. Don't ever let flames get you down, they're ridiculous. Anyone who flames really needs to understand that stories are what we make of them, and you are brave enough to invite other people to share your imagination which is more than I can claim.
| ravenclawoutcast13 chapter 25 . 12/25/2014
AH Hell yeah! IT'S SO DAM CUTE!
I LOVED IT!
| Flying Cupcakes chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
This is a FLAME! Dun...dun...duuuunnnnnnn... Oh wait... Never mind! Wow that was a lot of dot dot dots. If you're in a bad mood right now I'm sorry if I'm annoying you. Let me just change the subject, let me think...ooh! That's a good idea... Let's talk about cheese... Or... No. Anyways, that chapter was really good, I don't know what the original one was like but I know it was probably just as awesome or maybe even better!
| Angelz chapter 25 . 12/14/2014
I was disapointed with the ending but other then that i'll give the story a 8/10.