|Reviews for Warmth of the Fire|
| reddoggie chapter 13 . 8/15/2009
oh my gosh! im so freaking happy that i could read it now! i so wanted to read this when it was updated, but as i told you, i got kicked out of my house temporarily by my sister. okay, it wasnt that bad. but now i read it! yay~! it seriously surprised me when saix came back to life! okay, he never really died from that explosion. so many times axel has had demyx take roxas away, while he had fight someone. so sad. i didnt want axel to die! but i knew itd be hapy somehow.
i thought, what if you meant happy ending, by they both die together! NO~! thatd be a sad ending. so i shook that off. luxord is still alive in the end. funney. sort of? yeah i think i knew that was roxas at the end! just walking around, all happy, because hes going to see axel! so does demy own the bar called "Unnamed"?
so axel is a photographer for the biggest magazine in town? thats i knew roxy was heading to see axel, when he went to visit Unnamed. but i thought hed be the bar owner. such a happy reunion! sorry, ive just got a bunch of questions, but the only one i really wanna know is, where did roxas go to live for two years? and why did it take him two years to go see axel?
maybe it was his age. umm, sorry for this long review, but i just had to tell you all my thoughts since i was deprived of reading the last chapt for so long~! psh. really only a day, but who cares? thankyou for adding an epilogue too! so happy! keep writing, since i absolutely loved this story, and im not lying!QQ
| PhoenixDash chapter 13 . 8/14/2009
The best part of the whole story was all those "okays'" that I counted. I had my count-score until chapter 11 when I lost it.. If I had had it now I would have let you know how many okay:s you use in one chapter.. No hard feeling or anything mean at all, but I like to do special things when I read stories to remember them better. And I noticed that you used Okay alot.. Made my days! Anyway, it was really fun to read this!
| reddoggie chapter 12 . 8/13/2009
YES! im so glad you updated pretty c'mon axel! tell roxas your true feelings and maybe youll sway him to keep living! im happy that axel still loves roxas even after finding out what he truly is. otherwise that would be a shallow love(?). wha?
so thirteens the last chapt? i cant wait! whenever you update! ill be happy!XD roxas, dying wont make everyone happy. read your lovable red heads feelings! thanks for two updates! so happy!QQ
| reddoggie chapter 11 . 8/13/2009
oh my gosh! what is saix trying to say? and i cant believe he killed xmenas! so many times i was tricked while reading i was like, theres axel! or not him, than the next one will be axel! aww! i wonder who won between axel and luxord? i hope axel, even though i like luxord too. thanks for updating! its been a long time, but im glad you didnt give up!
i hope your next update wont be as long as this i was seriously like, oh my god! what is going on! cant wait for the next chapt, thanks again! i hope you do a special epilogue!QQ
| reddoggie chapter 10 . 6/30/2009
ah! i seriously screamed at the end! i knew it was luxord! i was going through different scenarios in my head where he would reveal himself. but yay! you updated! thanks for all the chapters! i love reading this story, its so interesting! i hope axel can keep his promise to roxas this time. XXPP
| reddoggie chapter 9 . 6/30/2009
oh axel. he seems sort of like a lie detector for roxas. jk. aw! i liked the end. it tied it together. cute! man. my internet was dead for a couple of days and i was so bored. shows how much i spend time on the internet! lol! THANKS! keep writing!
| flames04 chapter 7 . 6/27/2009
damn! Saix and Xemnas really suck right now :O
cant w8 for da next chapter i wonder how will Axel escape prison
| reddoggie chapter 8 . 6/25/2009
oh yay! im glad i could help you! i really like this chapter! roxas and axel got to be reunited! and poor roxy who had to stay with xmenas and saix until he was rescued! things are getting a lot more hard for axel and roxas. even demyx. hopefully theyll be able to come up with a plan. i cant wait for the next chapter! thanks for the chappter!QQ
| reddoggie chapter 7 . 6/23/2009
ah my gosh! this is getting so interesting! question, how could demyx stay the night at the prison cell with axel? he was only a visitor. ah well, poor roxy, something bad is going to happen to him at the club. hopefully axel will be able to save him! and keep his promise! i wonder how axel will get out of prison though, i mean, i wonder... well thanks for the awesome chapter, i totally enjoyed reading it! keep writing please. i want to know what happens!thanks, QQ
| Forgotten dragon chapter 6 . 6/21/2009
Does Axel live? will he roxas again? Why are Xemnas and siax hurting roxas? Awesome plot line Love it
| reddoggie chapter 6 . 6/21/2009
ooh my gosh! so suspenseful and stuff! poor roxas and axel. he doesnt want to be alone but he goes since he has too! i wonder why roxas is so special? like i mean, why would they care about a 15 year old kid they were taking care of? must be something important. keep writing cauz now i really wanna know whats gonna happen! thanks for writing this and all!QQ
| reddoggie chapter 5 . 6/17/2009
i love this story! cute, that axel loves roxy. good thing ax saved him, but will he be able to continue protecting roxas? Ooh~! Yay, i cant wait for the next chapter, thanksyou for writing this chap!QQ
| Aria6 chapter 5 . 6/17/2009
It could be more detailed, but I like this and want to read more.
| Ldrmas chapter 5 . 6/17/2009
cool, can't wait for more!
| reddoggie chapter 4 . 6/14/2009
aww, sad, poor roxas. how can axel be okay after getting shot twice in the shoulder? but luxord coming to get roxas has made the story more interesting. i cant wait for the next chapter.