|Reviews for The Startled Rabbit|
| The Agent Of Insanity chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
Awesome! I love it, very well written!
| Arty Thrip - Alpha 04 chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Ah, this story is cute. I realised it was Lucien pretty early on ('cause I set the parameters of the site to find Lucien and Vicente stories) but I love the way you portrayed him. Vicente and Lucien are my two favourite characters in this game, it's so depressing that they both die...
| Jessica Marsh chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
Ahh, I loved this! You set up Lucien so perfectly for his personality in adult life, and the way you subtly hinted that he had an abusive life was just grand. :)
| Kai Aquila chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Please update this story as soon as possible. Lucien is my favourite character and I love the way you describe his acceptance into the dark brotherhood. I don't no why, but I like it, when my favourite characters are abused in any way, you know, starving, beating, occasionally rape and stuff like that. Thank you very much.
| Loptr chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
This made me smile, it was very well written and intruiging. I'd like to see more if you have any more ideas for a story.
| NecroMantik chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
I loved it! I felt lost in it! You write very well.
| merlin effect chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Oh, the suspense
| SherrySummer chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Apart from the fact that this fic is about Lucien, there are two things I really liked about this fic. The first is Lucien's suspicion around food. And the second is his ability to lie while looking at someone's eyes. They are rather nice indication of his past before joining the Brotherhood. At the same time, they do hint at what he will become, a fine alchemist and master of Illusion. Good work. :)
| ReaperRain chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
A-ha, I knew it was Lucien! It's good that someone decided to write about this, since I don't think there's any other stories that detail his (possible) history. Anyway, this was a good story; you managed to convey an abusive past without being outright about it, which I think is the best way to do it. And I DO think Lucien had an abusive or at least difficult past, given he's not exactly sane.