Reviews for Land Beneath
my 2 guys chapter 8 . 8/28/2011
that was good keep it up
Guest chapter 8 . 11/7/2010
ur a great writer i cant wait to read more of this story plz update soon plz
cindy klover chapter 8 . 8/17/2010
i hope you wright more soon.
Elena0017 chapter 8 . 6/7/2010
LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR. ARE U PLANNIN TO WRITE MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY?
skye3197 chapter 8 . 3/28/2010
this seems like a great story! cant wait till u update and i can read more :P
Untamed Rosefire chapter 7 . 8/17/2009
Interesting... A VERY original idea! Update soon!
MarveyTibbsMcGarrettWilliams chapter 7 . 8/17/2009
please let her go back to edward and soon!
MasonJ chapter 7 . 8/17/2009
Wow luv it

It's not the cliche mermaid/twilight fics which is great

I just luv this fic and cant wait till you update soon
mermolie chapter 5 . 7/8/2009
ahh that was class, i dont no whats gonna happen but i hope you update soon
MasonJ chapter 5 . 7/7/2009
luv it update soon
MarveyTibbsMcGarrettWilliams chapter 5 . 7/6/2009
please please update please please!
mermolie chapter 4 . 6/17/2009
this is getting good hope you dont drop it please update soon
Death By Insanity chapter 4 . 6/15/2009
haha. charile is blind to vampires. i thought that they told charlie in breaking dawn. wait scratch that. need to know basis. maybe edward should have told charile. i hope edward can get to bella soon. hum. i bet you that the man that spoke is like her uncle or something.
SailorSpnFan chapter 4 . 6/15/2009
i don't want this story to disapear but i don't like typeing a review so i gess im stuck with it i love your stroy
Xx Ms.Killer Bunny xX chapter 3 . 6/12/2009
Hey,,this is very exciting story,, wat did bella see?,waht the hell is going on? Hhahahahaha, i like it very much..please update son!

-michelle XD
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