Reviews for Lesser Eyes of Mine
galindagirl chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
I love the arc of the piece and the how the two scenes play off of each other. I wish it was more clear that Mildmay is the narrator for the second scene, especially because Victor sounds more like Mildmay to me than Mildmay does. How can you describe Victor and his mannerism? How can you describe any of the characters? How does Victor's dialogue differ from Mildmay's narration?
RipleyWhiteFire chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Awwwwwwww this was good enough to almost bring me to tears. I hate and love it. TY you though its very well written just like your other stories.
ChibiItachi-chan chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
i'd like to say that this is heart warming. and i have a very cold heart, so thats saying something. hope you write another DoL fic soon .
Ghost-girl-13 chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
I love this story! So beautiful. I'm in love with this series, and am very happy you are writing these stories!