Fucking disgusting story

One of my favourite dark stories on here, so hot! Have you written anything else like this?

I'm hooked already!

Yes. still here! I can't stop my eyes from reading this! I felt a tad bewildered about my own feelings for EdwardBella in previous chapters. Relieved they are finally communicating consenting adults.

I'm thinking those lady cloths are Esme's. For some reason Edward kept a few items of hers. Carisle is drunkfeeling gloomy. He is possibly trying to protect Bella from Edward and his monster!

This is WOW! So much thought to set up the plot. The background story is a story in itself

I'm in!

Aww wot a lovely ending an the story very fifty shades esque except the biting an blood drinking lol i liked it ure a talent

I really enjoyed reading this story. I haven’t read a lot of Twilight fics like this one either, and I really like how you had Bella and Edward explore sexuality. Which is pretty high praise from me, considering—lol that I’ve read so many smutty fanfics that I can actually critique porn now. Anyways, thanks for writing this, it was a good read.

I found evil Esme an interesting variation to the norm. Her storyline is rather tragic. She didn't ask for that life, but it's intriguing how she chose to be all twisted when she woke up to it. Otherwise, a fun bit of fluff. Thanks.

She doesn't love him. She left him and demanded he stay away. Only came back to curse him over writing stuff about her.

I feel like you turned Edward into a complete pussy the past 3-4 chapters. Esme was right, he less of a man. He doesn't have go all evil vamp on her, but I'm saying.. at least fight for her. And show some type of anger when she pops back up on your door steps..

YYESSSSSSSS! I NEEDED SOMETHING LIKE THIS! OMG I'M SO EXCITED TO READ THE REST!

oh, how stupid

Edward wears a WHITE leather jacket? How embarrassing

Bonsoir, Histoire atypique et j'ai bien aimé. Merci