Reviews for The Monster and I
Wendyg63 chapter 4 . 7/7/2011
I loved Carlisle's POV and the explanation for his turning and Esme's leaving. I'm surprised that Carlisle could let her go - but I guess that he's showing doing it for the greater good.

Good story, good writing.
Wendyg63 chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
I like the creature that you've created. He really does struggle with himself. I sure hope Bella is OK
Wendyg63 chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
A great start that draws a reader in and wanting more.
Ladyniki chapter 16 . 7/1/2011
Good dark ward story! I had a feeling esme was gonna be evil! Though I am not really sure what happened during her transformation to make her evil?
Thirst for Knowledge chapter 7 . 6/22/2011
oh, that was cruel! i'm talking about the way your lemon suddenly went bad on me. i was enjoying the tartness before things turned sour.

i guess edward went a little too far? but he's a little TOO mean, and i suppose there's only so much a girl can take before questioning her own character (i.e., why does she like it?) or that of the guy who's abusing her.
Thirst for Knowledge chapter 4 . 6/21/2011
i don't have to have canon vampires. i think yours are quite interesting. i'm still trying to figure out what all makes them unique. it's kind of sad that i'll never meet jasper, emmett, or rosalie in your story. but you haven't mentioned alice yet, so i'm still holding on to some hope. what happened between carlisle and esme is really sad, but it's better than what i was guessing...which is that somehow james would have fed her to carlisle right as he was completing the change. i guess there was no way esme would have wanted to become like them, even though she clearly loved edward like he was her own child. that's too bad.
Auriana cullen chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
eu adorei
Roslyn1213 chapter 3 . 6/3/2011
"Your injuries give me a hard-on. Wanna go steady?" I truly loved that line. Very good so far.
H.L. Pennington chapter 16 . 5/20/2011
...Wow, I really can't think up a brilliant responce to your story. It was just so amazingly well written that any comments I could make of how wonderful it was would sound terribly cliche. Um...I don't know. I guess I'll just say this: I really enjoyed this story and have found you truley have a knack for writing. I'm disappointed to see that you've only posted one story and I would stronly encourage you to write more; you're an amazing author (See what I mean? That alliteration is soo overused. I wish I could come up with something better...). Anyways, I found your story very interesting and hope that I'll see some more of your stories out soon. Great job!
deanna127 chapter 16 . 5/17/2011
This story turned out much different than I thought it would when I started reading it. Still, it was a good first effort at writing.
Shelby chapter 16 . 5/1/2011
Great Story
SuperAsh chapter 16 . 4/24/2011
You've kept me guessing throughout this fic and even through that final chapter. Thank you! I was looking for something totally different but still wanted an E/B fic. You took this at a different angle which was excellent :-)

Thanks for sticking with this fic until the end!
SuperAsh chapter 7 . 4/23/2011
I'm kind of loving this fic! I love that Edward an Carlisle are flawed and a bit lost about who they are. It gives them some depth. And that Bella is doubting herself/her feelings. Your version of vampires is refreshing, thanks for giving us a little twist!
reneeloveschester chapter 16 . 4/2/2011
WOW. That's exactly how I think how it should have been. I like your vampires better. You should continue through their "learning" phase.
Helena KK chapter 16 . 3/20/2011
This fic is completely different to anything else I've ever read and very original. I'm glad it worked out well in the end even thought the chapter title had me worried!

Helena xxx
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