Reviews for The Monster and I
emo girl of the day chapter 7 . 6/16/2009
so sad. poor bella. poor edward. poor me. poor columbian girl that just lost her dog in a freaky kitchen accident. poor everyone. (I'm feeling emo today)
MaleficentKnits chapter 7 . 6/16/2009
cruel, darkward... YES!
DA Angsty chapter 7 . 6/16/2009
Scary and HOT! Can't wait to see where you take this...
LittleRedScientist chapter 7 . 6/16/2009
That was one HOT tequila chaser there! It was very well written. I was quite surprised that you made him stop though and not retaliate. oh and thank your beta for me! there weren't any grammar things that stuck out and made me falter in my reading and that made it all the more sweeter. you ladies rock!
amymorgan chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Great grabbing start!
Lemon Verbena chapter 7 . 6/15/2009
Maybe she could get him a shocker collar to wear so she could get his attention when he's being over the top...don't know but I think it was fair for her to say what she did about Jacob being tender. It'd also be fair for her to say how she feels about being disciplined - yowza!
yankeerose chapter 7 . 6/15/2009
Only a guy would get worked up over a dream...
Viridis73 chapter 7 . 6/15/2009
Ouch, that one hurt.
flecour chapter 7 . 6/14/2009
Fantastic Story!
DarkAngelRakell chapter 7 . 6/14/2009
aw so sad
noel-cullen chapter 7 . 6/14/2009
Of course I want to! Gosh! This was a good chapter...Oddly, even though the sex was amazing, I found myself craving more substance. Not to be critical, just an observation...

1. The dream beginning - I love doing that, and I love it when other authors include dreams. It reveals the subconcious in ways a person otherwise sometimes can't admit.

2. This spot was great! Funny, yet deep, and just...m. "What kind of girl not only lets her boyfriend hit her, but actually talks him into it and then gets off on it? I thought I could accept Edward for who he was, but was this a side of myself that I wasn't willing to see? I didn't know, so we played Trivial Pursuit and went for walks in the forest, and I tried to pretend I didn't want to jump him every time he smiled at me or ran a hand through his hair."

3. WHOA! Shocker ending...I couldn't believe he left! And Bella was kind of a jerk...but I understood it, too. Fabulous, smooth yet abrupt shift in emotion and scene.
xXTwilightLoverrrrXx chapter 7 . 6/14/2009
Oh heartfail! Wicked heartfail. But I do love a dirty, rough Edward somethin fierce...
LindyP chapter 7 . 6/14/2009
WOW! i FOUND YOUR STORY OVER ON Darkwards Dungeon & it is intense! You write amazingly well & the plot of this story is truly original! I can't wait to read more!

LindyP :)
Pojo-san chapter 7 . 6/14/2009
Ouchville, population you Edward. Props to you Bella.
TwilightVicki chapter 7 . 6/14/2009
Eek, Edward scares the crap out of me sometimes! lol I actually am really glad Bella had her little revelation when he called her slut. She really is giving him everything, I'm glad she's standing up for herself a bit. Great chapter. Great story! 0)
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