Reviews for The Monster and I
Rina22 chapter 4 . 5/17/2009
This chapter was perfect I understand the other stuff a lot better now. Your writing is so addictive.. cant wait for more :)
Lorinstarr chapter 4 . 5/17/2009
i love it!
Lorinstarr chapter 3 . 5/17/2009
o i love this! Please update soon for me!
beavoicenotanecho chapter 3 . 5/17/2009
really really good, I liked it a lot!
Chrissienuil chapter 3 . 5/17/2009
i loved your chapters so far..I really hope you will keep the story in balance..there are a lot of stories with a dominant edward, but not all of them keep a balance in the story..they change bella and edward way to much in the story.. what makes the story not real..i hope i explained a little what i wanted to say..

but keep up the work..
Rina22 chapter 3 . 5/17/2009
I really liked this story, although I feel I am a little bit confused. Are your vampires the same as SM or are they different... if they are different could you explain them in more detail it just might help me understand a little better. I also felt like it went a little fast like a lot happened in a short period of time that made it kind of hard to comprehend. OK so besides all that I love this dark, twisty, sexual Edward and your writing is really beautiful especially your descriptions. I am dying to see where you take this :)
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