awww

And we have that... Interesting idea and wonderful story, but do you know painful it is to fall off a chair 3 feet from the ground?

I enjoyed your story and was wondering if you would ever consider something along the same premise, but with Severus traveling to that era alone and sparking a relationship with one of the founding ladies.

the weird thing is is that my name is actually moira

now this was a sweet story. i like your fanfics i am going to read the others but man this one cool. keep up the good work.

That was so sweet!

That was good.

Cute. A bit heavy on the deus-ex-machina side, but otherwise fun.

- Dime

awww! loved the ending soooo much!

I like this story. It's well written, with very believable dialogue. I think it's very rushed, however. I'd like to see some more details about what exactly has changed since Sev and Harry got back- i.e is the world a better place of muggleborns? are slytherin and gryffindor houses close in the way that their founders were?

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Good story. I like it when an author gives reasons for characters to start acting OOC. Good ending.

I liked this. :)

I loved it! Especially the epilogue.

It's a good story, well written and it has a good base idea. I liked the way you made Harry and Severus reconcile as well as showing Salazar in a kinder light.

However, I think this story could be improved by making Severus's reaction a little more realistic because I think it is unlikely that a man can go from hating someone from being fond of them in less than a few days. Where is the denial? The angst? The shame?

Furthermore, while I like the way you've shown Salazar Slytherin, it doesn't quite fit with cannon. You comment in the epilogue that they read about him being a 'defender of muggle-borns'. If Tom Riddle had discovered that, then it is unlikely he would have made the transformation to Lord Voldemort.

I think you could make this story even better than it is if you add more into it/edit it.

And while you should feel free to disagree with me, I would like to clarify that I am NOT a flamer - not at all - and I only seek to tell you how I feel it could be improved.

As it says, "A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding gift a reader can give . Please use this golden opportunity to offer a well deserved praise and/or tips for improvement."

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Darkie