|Reviews for Simple Affection|
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/8
I love it!
Roxas is so cute!
Axel as well!
| WindRush chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Gah, I just love your storries with little Axel and little Roxas, they're just so cute!
| a nobody that luvs chapter 3 . 4/15/2011
im so happy u didn't twist this up maken it scary makeing ether roxas or axel insane u tend to do that alot :)
| Bazil-kun chapter 3 . 1/20/2010
Aww. These stories are so cute! They make me wanna squish Roxas. xD Damn, all of you're stories are so good! xD Oh wells, awesome story!
P.S. Have a nice day and good luck with whatever you're doing! : )
| Backlash96 chapter 3 . 7/6/2009
*squees* ohmigosh... Roxas is too cute for words X3
God, all these are so CUTE! Even though the sweetness and fluff gave me a cavity... NO REGRETS! XD
| Finyb chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Aw! This has to be one of the sweetest things I have ever read before in my life! There can never be enough fluff in the world and this story is verry fluffy!
| Gamet Kauum Gekxoum chapter 3 . 6/19/2009
Interesting setting. The swing thing was funny. I like how Roxas forms his sentences when he's little. I'm glad Axel didn't buy the balloon; it would've been too obvious. Never heard of kiwi flavored ice cream before. I'm with Axel on the ice cream preference. When Axel insists on eating himself, "take" should be "took." And the first period in the next paragraph should be a comma, I believe. Wow though, those were the only real editing errors I saw. Gettin' better at this.
Bad things happening to your relative made the story not fluffy? (Oh, you can ignore that question if it's too personal.)
| toastyoats chapter 3 . 6/19/2009
still cute :3
though i beg the question...
are you honestly growing tired of akuroku? :s
| Cirque du Lune chapter 3 . 6/17/2009
Don't worry about the lack of fluffiness, it's all really cute all the same. _ (I now devote myself to reviewing every chapter of this. Nyahaha. You are awesome. XD)
| AGrownMansTears chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Cute, I love the way you described the muffin. XD I'm now going off to draw Roxas wearing a shirt saying, "Did you hug a muffin today?" lol
| Rin-chan101093 chapter 3 . 6/17/2009
That... was so adorable. I loved in-itself was fluff despite what you think. It was just... so cute...
| reddoggie chapter 3 . 6/17/2009
ahh, thats okay, just reading this is fun enough. theyre so cute since theyre so young. the way roxas says words is cute like fwiends! thanks for the chapp, keep writing if you have time!QQ
| Insanecat6 chapter 3 . 6/17/2009
Thank you for the dedication! It makes me really happy.
Hope Psycology doesn't kill you too badly. I've never taken it myself, but from what I've heard from people that have it sounds really cool, but really hard at the same time. At least once you're done you'll be able to mess with peoples heads and analyze them a bit.
Don't feel bad about it being less fluffy. It was still really cute regardless. Part of that is because Roxas cried. Cause while no one likes to see a crying child, you've got to admit that they're still cute. Their eyes go so big and watery that you can't help but want to comfort them.
One thing that kind of confused me in this chapter was when you were talking about Roxas' parents. At one point, you said that his mother watched 'his husband' playing with Roxas. That was the only place where you refered to Roxas' mother as something other then mother, so I couldn't figure out if it was just a typo or if you really made Roxas' mother a guy. So are his parents a gay couple with m-preg or adoption, or are they a straight couple with a typo in the writing?
Love to you for the fluff. Hope all goes well with summer school and the relative thing. Bye.
| Wow this doesn't exist anymore chapter 3 . 6/17/2009
Heres my special word for you: Future.
It should be two part! One in the current AkuRoku fluffiness of children, and the other in the FUTTURREE. (think of it as how old physic guys say it in movies)
And YAY fluff bunny! *huggles computer* I CAN NEVER HATE THIS STORY EVEN IF SOMETHING LIKE A BUG DIED. BECAUSE YOU WOULD SOMEHOW MAKE THE DEATH OF A BUG FLUFFY. Ew bug guts...
| gomii chapter 3 . 6/17/2009
Aw I loved it. I love balloons, too.. as much as Roxas does xD
And I love little Axel and littler Roxas, hee!