Reviews for Tempest
Iawen Londea chapter 4 . 10/6/2009
This is awesome. I've decided to just go to your profile and get all your Numb3rs fics from there, haha.

So, I've read more Numb3rs fics now than I've seen of the show, LOL! But I was a good girl and went out and acquired season one so I can start playing catch up, LOL.

Back to your fic... I really like this a lot. Don whump is awesome. LOL. I like Billy a lot from your stories so far, LOL! Have yet to meet him in the series, haha. You should write a mini companion fic that shows his "worrying reaction" to seeing the wreckage of Don's car. That would be awesome. :D
newgal chapter 4 . 5/23/2009
Love this mini series. You're great. So, did Don start to have feelings for Brown?
PattyB chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
I was wondering where Billy was and am tickled to death he finally showed

up. hehe Love that redhead too.

Just like I said about the rocks and wrecked, burned car, I'd have gone

off the deep in too if I'd come upon the scene and didn't know Don had been

pulled out before the drop.

Good job,VV, you'r good at this storytelling.
PattyB chapter 3 . 5/21/2009
Well, you gotta say the lady has a head on her. When the opportunity

presents itself, grab it. :D
PattyB chapter 2 . 5/21/2009
Exciting and described extremely well. I can just see that long drop to

the rocks - and then the explosion. Wow, I'm thankful Don was out of that car.

Interesting statement from Browne. I wouldn't want to be a cop killer either.
CD57 chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
"Yeah. I may have reacted in an... uh... slightly worrying manner ..."


that was so sweet!

now bring on the bigger story, please! This was great, and now I want more

epalladino chapter 4 . 5/20/2009
Short, but very well written.

Thanks, Beth
Ms.GrahamCracker chapter 4 . 5/20/2009
Glad Don is in the hospital safe and very glad Browne got away. Happy to see Billy show up and love the fact he went a little beserk when he thought Don had been in the vehicle.

You might guess from my four reviews that I really enjoyed this mini series and I certainly hope you have more ideas like this one.

Thanks so much for sharing.
CD57 chapter 3 . 5/19/2009
Helpless, Don's least favorite position to be in.

mwaahaa and that's just where we like to get him, don't we...

cool, wish this was all longer, though.

can't wait for the update

Ms.GrahamCracker chapter 3 . 5/19/2009
Ah Huh, I see his plan. Once she sees him without his shirt she won't be able to resist him and after he gives her a night she'll never forget, she'll willingly go back with him.

I always knew he was more than just a pretty face.

Great update.
Carrie chapter 3 . 5/19/2009
Definitely not just you. :) Awesome story.
MzPink chapter 2 . 5/19/2009
awesome! please update!
PattyB chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
That frying pan to the fire description is apt, I must say.

You certainly describe pain well. Poor Don, I'm sitting here

hurting for him.
sydcasy chapter 2 . 5/18/2009
Interesting cliffhanger. Can't wait for more.
Ms.GrahamCracker chapter 2 . 5/18/2009
Very tense. I loved that even when she told him she wouldn't hurt him, but she wouldn't let him take her in, he remains an agent at heart. "That would work far better if you didn't help me." Oh, my, Donnie.

So, she saved him. Now what?

Great installment. Waiting for the next one. Sounds interesting.
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