|Reviews for Not So Drunk as You Think I Am|
| sidjack chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
You are totally nuts,this was terrific. Great job, and I need chapter two. What happened? You did a fantastic drabble.
Sam knowing Dean is hurt and hurrying off, leaving the clerk.
| Merisha chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
OMG :0 - I hope you're going to update with a drabble each week, cause you can't leave us hanging there ... no sir, no way! I want more LOL :D
Will keep a look out, may be biting me nails in the meantime!
Hugs and luv
| sweetysmart0505 chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
OMG! That was totally awesome for your first time! Better than mine, lol. Totally sad! Great job!
| LivingForTv chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Uhu, well, don't stand around be brief then - Expand! I want more of this you hear? Taken by what? Returned from where? Alive because? Tell me! Please?
| sayrae3times chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
(Ohs in delight) Nice one. I haven't tried to drabble, although I've thought about it. Loved your first one, though! Can we see a much longer version? If I bat my eyes and look really really cute for you?
| ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Great drabble and like the twist that Dean was not drunk but injured, quite a surprise given the title!
| DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Nice first drabble.
| Alutek chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
one word: MORE! :D
| Impaladreams chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Good to see you over here, drabbling! lol
A wonderful first drabble, too...Already left me wanting to know more, why's our boy stumbling? I love Sam's speedy reaction!
I've added The Soul Collector to my 'To read' pile, I'm still climbing my betaing backlog - but I'm getting there...
| JenF chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Ooh - this needs to be more than a drabble now. Any plans to extend it into a story? I love me some Dean in danger and Sam to the rescue.
And this was my first drabble too so I know exactly what you mean about sticking to 100 words!
| L5472 chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
*gasp* Dean injured!
Sam obviously knows his brother very well. Nice ;)
| Ani-maniac494 chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I know what you mean, drabbles are tough! It's hard to try to say everything you want to in so few words.
You did a great job with this though. :)
"Sam headed for the room at a dead run. Dean. Stumbling? That meant unsteady…uncoordinated…hurt.
Because Sam knew his brother hadn’t been out at some bar, drinking.
He’d been taken."
I love Sam's reaction to the clerk's words, and I can just imagine how Dean looked too, trying to stay upright and not pass out so he could get back to their room. Wonderful imagery.
Great work, as always! :)
| starzstruck-1 chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Very nice firsty! Love one shots... and drabbles, apparently. It takes a lot of talent to be able to compress the mood and mode of a whole scene or incident in 100 words; i'd never be able to do that.
| pandora jazz chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I liked this one.
Nice twist there at the end, Dean injuried, not drunk as the clerk thought.
Thanks for sharing.
| PADavis chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I saw the alert and thought - did she just write a drabble? Welcome to the madness - and this was wonderful. Beautiful debut, baby! And yeah, its hard but fun.
But oh yeah, want to see what happened right after this.