Reviews for Supervising Edwin
alphaladywolf chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
It was alright.
GrossGirl18 chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
ArtsAndCraftsMajor chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
You might want to work on your grammer. And it all could have happened without her going to the movie - so the spying aspect was unnessisary. Also, where was the rest of the family? Wouldn't George and Nora break out baby pictures as he was leaving, ask where Lizzie was going (seeing as she left right after them) and where was Marti?

Hope it all helped.

Smiles!~ :]
Leaf26 chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Nice story and not bad for your first LWD story. Keep it up!
itsi3 chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I think it was Great! Especially for your first LWD! We definately need more Lizwin stories out there!

There was one part where Edwin came in and Lizzie said “Why would you want to kiss her?" Instead of "Why WOULDN'T you want to kiss her?"

I love the In God We Trust piece at the end!

Great job!