Reviews for You've Kept Me Waiting |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was so beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() You probably don’t read these anymore but Alice “woke up” and her first vision was of jasper just fyi |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed this look into Alice and Jasper’s journey. Really appreciate the brief look into Jasper’s perspective with the epilogue. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story/fanfiction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this story some years ago but recently began rereading my favorites. Since Jasper and Alice are the most interesting "Twilight" couple to me, this tale is particularly special. It is so delightful right front the beginning! The detailing is so rich and Alice's nerves so real and evident that this reader felt like she was a nearby friend keeping her company. Looking forward to reading the rest of it again. |
![]() ![]() This was a phenomenal story! I've never read a fanfic about Jasper and Alice's story before and this makes me want to binge read much more along with the rest of yours! Fantastic job with these characters and storyline. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really lovely piece. I can't think of a truer imagining of Alice and Jasper joining the Cullen family. Great work. |
![]() ![]() I love that you included a catatonic Alice missing Jasper. It goes so well with the Twilight canon; it makes so much more since why Edward is so pained to see memories of Bella in the same state over him, especially if he had to witness Alice pine for Jasper. It's not like vampires ever forget. I just had to stop on the middle of reading this and let you know. Thank you |
![]() ![]() I cant wait to see how Alice will go from insecure and unsure to the little pixie we all know and love in the novels |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! So good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'What a man, what a man, what a man, what a mighty good man...' ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Peter, that was low. Really low. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know how I am dealing with their cuteness. |