Reviews for You've Kept Me Waiting
yellowipod chapter 2 . 2/20/2010
"I wished I had a heartbeat for a moment, just so I could hear it stop" *SIGH* How sweet!

I think Jasper is an equally interesting character, especially when he's not trying to eat Bella. Speaking of, I know they said Jasper had problems adapting to animals at first. I'm wondering how he'll handle his first try..
yellowipod chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
She called them mortals. I've always wondered why more fics haven't used the term.

& I've also wondered why more authors don't wonder about Alice's story.. So I'm really looking forward to reading your idea :)
MariaMe chapter 43 . 2/19/2010
i love this story. hank you so much for writing it it was really nice to read
Till-Owlyglass chapter 43 . 2/9/2010
I've just spent the entire day reading this. It's amazing, you are truly talented! I love how we got to hear something from Jasper's perspective at the end. Thank You!
TwilightCakes chapter 9 . 2/8/2010
Hello! : )

Just wanted to say that I am really enjoying the story so far. You write a very good Alice, she's growing on me more and more!

Very good, I'm really liking it a lot.
mengtoreality chapter 43 . 2/6/2010
aw! Thanks for the cute story!
Katzenpfote chapter 43 . 2/4/2010
this is a truly wonderful story and i enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you.
Katzenpfote chapter 11 . 2/2/2010
I rather like this story, sadly, I have to go to sleep now. Will be back another time to read the rest
booky-true-false-identity chapter 36 . 1/27/2010
this is a really good story, i'm sad it ended but the ending fit perfectly
severussnaperules chapter 43 . 1/25/2010
beautiful beautiful story! This was absolutley amazing with an amazing ending, and I'm so sad it's over! You should do like, a seris of oneshots, or something...but it's totally up to you, i just LOVE your writing style! xox great work, i loved it!
fizzypop4305 chapter 36 . 1/25/2010
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg

The end was SO sad! But So good! You are an AMAZING author! Proof: You made me cry, and that's hard to do! Great Great Great job!
deleted111 chapter 43 . 1/24/2010
wow. absolutely WOW! that was the most amazing fic ever ever ever - everything about it was just so perfect! you are an amazing writer. thankyou for writing!
ilovejasper chapter 10 . 1/18/2010
omg the end was SO absolutley amazing! It almost made me cry...

though that might be because there was a sad song on the radio...

but you are an AMAZING author! LOVE LOVE LOVE it!

keep it up!
blue-peridot chapter 43 . 1/7/2010
perfect ending to a superb story. i love that you ended it here- for the entire story i've felt sorry for edward, without a mate, and it's nice that you end it just when he does have one. also that it's jasper pov. thanks for writing this!
blue-peridot chapter 42 . 1/7/2010
THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY UTTERLY FANTASTIC AND PERFECT. the wedding was beautiful, the time-stop thing was effective ( i actually pictured it in my mind, great imagery) and i LOVED the vows. i'm taking note of the add-on so i can use it eventually when i get married. they seem kinda familiar though, did you make them up or get them from somewhere? the “Entreat me not to leave you or to return from following you. For where you go, I will go, and where you stay, I will stay." was beautiful. but btw, what are their religious beliefs? since the whole 'your god is my god' thing..

but absolutely wonderful, wonderful chapter.
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