Reviews for You've Kept Me Waiting |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow. absolutely WOW! that was the most amazing fic ever ever ever - everything about it was just so perfect! you are an amazing writer. thankyou for writing! |
![]() ![]() omg the end was SO absolutley amazing! It almost made me cry... though that might be because there was a sad song on the radio... but you are an AMAZING author! LOVE LOVE LOVE it! keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() perfect ending to a superb story. i love that you ended it here- for the entire story i've felt sorry for edward, without a mate, and it's nice that you end it just when he does have one. also that it's jasper pov. thanks for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY UTTERLY FANTASTIC AND PERFECT. the wedding was beautiful, the time-stop thing was effective ( i actually pictured it in my mind, great imagery) and i LOVED the vows. i'm taking note of the add-on so i can use it eventually when i get married. they seem kinda familiar though, did you make them up or get them from somewhere? the “Entreat me not to leave you or to return from following you. For where you go, I will go, and where you stay, I will stay." was beautiful. but btw, what are their religious beliefs? since the whole 'your god is my god' thing.. but absolutely wonderful, wonderful chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh it's fantastic! *sigh* |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, this is lovely. i thought the beginning of the last chapter kinda melodramatic, and jasper too... flimsy. but i loved the line “I could forgive you for being a horrible murderer. But I know I couldn’t live without being your wife.” and elsewise it was great. this is quite good too, i like the yellow roses inspiration, and the dress sounds fantastic! pity there's no pic of it. |
![]() ![]() I have no words for how amazing of a read this was. I seriously applaud you. |
![]() ![]() OMG I LOVED THIS STORY! when Jasper left i was crying actual tears. i cant believe he did that. Edward is so sweet, to think of alice. i would want Edward as a big brother, but my heart is only for jasper. lol loved this story and i couldnt stop reading it. I thought Maria was a real bitch. so im glad she is out of there life. there first home was awesome and Alice's car was awesome. i liked how she was like dont you dare scratch my car on new years when they sit on the hood. there so right for eachother. this was an awesome story. i think its my favourite out of all of the ones i read good job :) *thumbs up* |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a sweet story! Jasper and Alice are without a doubt my favorite characters and this was such an amazing background story for them! And I love how the epilogue brought us back to a time with Bella, just to remind us how long their love lasts 3 |
![]() ![]() You made me cry. Not that that's a bad thing, though. have you considered writing a Carlisle and Esme or a Rosalie and Emmet? They could be linked with this one. X |
![]() ![]() ![]() VERY WELL DONE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS WAS A VERY MOVING CHAPTER. I CRIED SEVERAL TIMES. THE DETAILS YOU USED TO DEVELOP THE CHARACTERS AND THEIR RELATIONSHIPS HELPED TO DEMONSTRATE THE HEARTBREAKING WRETCHEDNESS FELT BY ALL THE CHARACTERS INVOLVED. GREAT JOB. CANT WAIT TO FINISH IT. IT WAS SO GOOD I DECIDED NOT TO WAIT UNTIL THE END OF THE STORY TO GIVE MY TWO CENTS. PLEASE KEEP ON WRITING. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a wonderful read, and I only spotted two or three mistakes in the whole thing. Congratulations on such a beautiful story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A perfect start. I can already see that your writing style is great, and that makes me want to continue reading even more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I love it so far! I love that you wrote this! I was born and raised in Philly, I moved down south when I was 14 and always missed it terriably! So when I read the saga and discovered that was where Alice and Jasper met, I was happy lol as lame as that might sound. I'm so glad you included little things about places in philly. I also love how you wrote about what Alice was feeling and her visions of the Cullens. Cant wait to read more! |