Reviews for You've Kept Me Waiting
blue-peridot chapter 21 . 12/3/2009
love, love loved the last line. they seem to be in a LOT of trouble. maria's pretty formidable. but their bond is really strong too. i like how you brought that out. charlie's a pretty interesting creature.
blue-peridot chapter 20 . 12/3/2009
oh shit.
blue-peridot chapter 19 . 12/3/2009
oh no... that's so horrible! i admire their strenght and determination not to end the boy's life.

i must say, this is amazingly canon. i love how you write their relationship.
blue-peridot chapter 18 . 12/3/2009
oh. that's so sad, and sweet. lovely chapter as usual.
blue-peridot chapter 17 . 12/3/2009
keeps getting better
blue-peridot chapter 16 . 12/3/2009
aaw! that was good.
blue-peridot chapter 15 . 12/3/2009
rather clever of jasper, i think. and alice shoulld be touched, not hurt- she's not rose. i liked the stock market, the riding, the ungentlemanliness.
blue-peridot chapter 14 . 12/3/2009
well, this really does show her emotion, seeing as vampires can't cry.

but it was really quite good. i like how attuned they are. marlene seems quite nice, and mrs. doctor annoying. the struggle over the baby and retaining their humanity was superb.
blue-peridot chapter 13 . 12/3/2009
lovely chapter.
blue-peridot chapter 12 . 12/3/2009
aw. just like a wedding night. i hope they didn't leave behind all the stuff they bought, though. and i liked the sherrif and his family, their new home, and the new year.
blue-peridot chapter 11 . 12/3/2009
charlotte's dilemma and her frienship with alice was quite interesting. and the end... i'm glad they're going and have resisted.
blue-peridot chapter 10 . 12/3/2009
aw! and btw, what does jasper want to do, wait for marriage? christmas presents were fantastic and very thoughtful. i liked the stocks and the identity, but the heart was best of all. the end was so sweet!
blue-peridot chapter 9 . 12/3/2009
um. jasper's quite a gentleman. perhaps too much so. but i loved the shopping!

this is really a fantastic story. i love the storyline, something i always wanted to read done well.
blue-peridot chapter 8 . 12/3/2009
good as usual. the end was quite sexy/funny... i'm glad she looked before she ran!
blue-peridot chapter 7 . 12/3/2009
love this chapter. the killing was pretty shocking, but i can understand why. and the kiss was lovely.
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