Reviews for You've Kept Me Waiting
Eli42 chapter 43 . 7/24/2013
Absolutely FANTASTIC fic. Well written, detailed, thorough and just all around entertaining to read-a real pleasure!
Gothic-Angel342 chapter 28 . 6/30/2013
wait kate is supposed to work like a tazer and elazar is supposed to sence anothers power or gift
lol chapter 43 . 6/21/2013
Okay... where do I start?
I'd say that I have read better stories but also worse. This one is something between.
Alice and Jasper were both out of character, Jasper even worse than Alice. I think he should have been the one who is uncertain about things, but most of the time it was her (save finding the Cullens).
The entire story with Maria was totally out of place and very unnecessary. I don't get it why they didn't just escape! There were plenty of chances for that!
And Charlie was VERY annoying because that's the only character you can give to a child (but that is not your fault).
And the whole Denali clan was false but I think you've already read that in other reviews.
Last point: the Cullens. Why did they let Alice and Jasper in that easy? I thought that at least Rose was a little suspicious. But nothing! The Cullens welcomed them with open arms. That was just...too easy.

The good things were:
- you had a good pace in your story
- it wasn't too corny
- there were plenty of paragraphs with Alice's thoughts and feelings
- you displayed the relationship between Edward and Alice very well

Sorry for my bad english, I'm german.

Guest chapter 43 . 6/5/2013
This story is absolutely PERFECT!
Jasper1863Hale chapter 43 . 4/29/2013
I haven't been well the past week and in order to distract my mind, I sought out the one Alice/Jasper story that I remember reading and fully enjoying two years ago. It took a little while to find, but I'm so glad I did and I've read all 43 chapters in two days, what's more, I feel better for it also! My mind really needed the distraction and relaxation that this story has given. Thank you so much, I'd love to read something new from you.
Mighty-Cheese-Puff chapter 4 . 4/22/2013
Still amazing
Mighty-Cheese-Puff chapter 3 . 4/22/2013
I adore this story its amazing!11
Ashley Laredo chapter 29 . 3/30/2013
Oh my gosh! I LIVE in Stowe! Yay! Its in Lamoille County, the third cloudiest in the US- perfect for vampires! Go Stowe!
I love what you've done with this story, its really well written, and I love Alice and Jasper. I think you messed up a few things with the Denalis: Eleazar's gift is sensing other gifts, Kate has blond hair, and her gift is electrically shocking people. But really good job! And yay for Stowe! We're famous now with the von Trapps!
Mighty-Cheese-Puff chapter 6 . 3/15/2013
Love this story simply amazing. :)
Guest chapter 10 . 3/5/2013
I love this.
Mighty-Cheese-Puff chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Amazing Chaper
Ajluv chapter 28 . 2/4/2013
Kate can shock people. Not sense a lie.
cl.lee chapter 3 . 1/9/2013
isn't MA for Mary Alice and JW for Jasper Whitlock?
Saij Emrys chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Great Story!
hpdude-4life chapter 43 . 12/25/2012
Aww yeey! Love jpov. And this story :)
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