Reviews for You've Kept Me Waiting
her illusion chapter 43 . 9/18/2012
aww this was lovely!i liked edward & the walking in scene in the epilogue LOL.
RogueMetamorph chapter 42 . 7/31/2012
RogueMetamorph chapter 40 . 7/31/2012
Only You by The Platters; I've been listening to this song since i started reading this and I can't get it out of my head now.
This is a fantastic fanfiction, there are no Mary-Sue moments and everything that happens makes sense. This it beatuiful. You don't believe me but this fanfiction belongs in a book to be sold, it's that fantastic.
RogueMetamorph chapter 39 . 7/31/2012
Alright... I guess I can forgive him too.
Through that whole chapter I was crying and sobbing like a mad woman. My room mate came in a few times to see if i was alright and I had to tell her that i was reading a fanficition.
RogueMetamorph chapter 38 . 7/31/2012
Thank, God! I'm not even Alice and I missed him. That's how great of a writer you are and how great these characters already were, that you made me miss Jasper the way Alice does.
RogueMetamorph chapter 36 . 7/31/2012
I'm an actual person on . I swear.

I started crying. Why the hell would Jasper leave? Alice is going to be a mess! The last thing on Earth that could possibly happen is them seperating. This is impossible and extremely painfully. I was listening to a sad song as I read this and that was definitely a mistake, though I would have cried regardless. Jasper can't leave!
Guest chapter 43 . 7/18/2012
Such a beautiful ending to such a beautiful story. I always enjoy reading stories about Alices and Jaspers life before the Cullens and you described it perfectly.
amiboo chapter 9 . 6/15/2012
I'm really enjoying this story. Ever since Eclipse I've wished that SMeyer would write a prologe type story about Jasper and Alice and here it is. Thanks for reading my mind.
MaMZg67 chapter 43 . 4/4/2012
I was so happy when I found this story! I wanted to read about Alice's life after she was changed and when she found Jasper and finally when they met the Cullens and you did a wonderful job writing this story. It's simply amazing :D
little.lost.panda chapter 28 . 3/19/2012
Please excuse my harsh attitude, but I can't help but being upset. Kate doesn't not sense lies! That's Maggie of the Irish coven! Kate shocks people! Ugg, I hate when people get gifts wrong! Gah, I really, really hate it! Good story though, it's just the little things like that that get to me. I love your story, very, very! good.
gabyhyatt chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
i love it
BeautifulMessenger chapter 9 . 2/21/2012
I'm really liking your story so far. I know you posted it years ago. But I thought you might appreciate a comment from a fresh perspective.

So far the only thing that doesn't sit right with me is how Peter was talking about humans in this chapter. I know they hunt the usual way. But Jasper was clear that the vampires in the southern armies saw people like cattle. And I could never imagine someone talking about cattle that way. They'd be crazy! "I have the power to decide who lives and who dies! Bessie will give milk, but Bluebell will be dinner! Mwa ha ha!" lol Peter and Charlotte don't think evil superior thoughts over their prey, any more than a lion would feel wickedly superior over a zebra. It's just food.

That's all. And, like I said, I know you wrote this a long time ago. You might not even be checking your reviews anymore, for all I know.

But I have added this story to my C2(community), if you subscribe to it it will come up higher in searches and help more people find this delightful work. I really do love it.
penpaperaser chapter 43 . 2/14/2012
Beautiful! Absolutely, heartbreakingly BEAUTIFUL story! I love EVERY SINGLE chapter! You are an awesome, awesome, awesome... infinitely awesome writer! You build up their history so nicely, and I am amazed at how well you managed keep the tension throughout such a long story.

The portrayal of Alice's enthusiasm and quick mind, and Jasper's military life and the rest of the Cullen family is fantastically canon. I especially found Edward's personality through Alice's eyes refreshing as compared to reading it through Bella's "in-love" point-of-view. I really like how you explored the unique sibling relationship between Edward and Alice - the way they can read each other so fast and the way Edward shares his hobbies with Alice - chess and piano. He's fiercely protective of her in a sibling-like way that is lovely.

Most of all, I love the emotional depth in your story. I feel sorry I didn't find it earlier. Congratulations (3 years late...) on finishing it!

PS. I noticed that your prediction of Jasper's perception of newborn Bella is jarringly accurate o.o He WAS waiting for her to be the weakest link rather than himself!
penpaperaser chapter 3 . 2/13/2012
beautiful chapter! i love the "heart and mind" part, it's so sweet and fluffy :)
BeeBuuzzz chapter 10 . 1/30/2012
How sweet! I hope Alice can say it her self soon (; But anyway, I love how they are in this story! :D
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