Reviews for The New Kid
Aelita Stones1 chapter 10 . 7/15/2010
Wow simply wow
Aelita Stones1 chapter 2 . 7/15/2010

I bet that the blond and pink hair kid where jeremie and aelita
Aelita Stones1 chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
good but when is this
Codexe chapter 8 . 8/11/2009
Hello there! :D

Nice job! I liked it.

Is Mark's brother Ulrich? That's sounds interesting :)

Btw, there were a couple of spelling errors like 'witch' should be 'which'. Plus, 'tesing' i think you mean 'teasing'?

Overall, I think this is a cool idea and please update soon xD
DaniPotterLovesGod chapter 7 . 8/1/2009
Oh wow! I hope you update this.
peter van pickle chapter 5 . 6/15/2009
Its a good one plz update
Yoru no Sakka chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
most excellent! great job though at times you didn't say something properly for example:

Ulrich's face paled

It could have been this and been a bit more desribive:

Ulrich's face slowly started to pale when he saw the movers and the priciple come out of their room. As well as a boy with chestnut hair and about the boy's age come out last.