|Reviews for The New Kid|
| Aelita Stones1 chapter 10 . 7/15/2010
Wow simply wow
| Aelita Stones1 chapter 2 . 7/15/2010
I bet that the blond and pink hair kid where jeremie and aelita
| Aelita Stones1 chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
good but when is this
| Codexe chapter 8 . 8/11/2009
Hello there! :D
Nice job! I liked it.
Is Mark's brother Ulrich? That's sounds interesting :)
Btw, there were a couple of spelling errors like 'witch' should be 'which'. Plus, 'tesing' i think you mean 'teasing'?
Overall, I think this is a cool idea and please update soon xD
| DaniPotterLovesGod chapter 7 . 8/1/2009
Oh wow! I hope you update this.
| peter van pickle chapter 5 . 6/15/2009
Its a good one plz update
| Yoru no Sakka chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
most excellent! great job though at times you didn't say something properly for example:
Ulrich's face paled
It could have been this and been a bit more desribive:
Ulrich's face slowly started to pale when he saw the movers and the priciple come out of their room. As well as a boy with chestnut hair and about the boy's age come out last.