Reviews for A Crack in the Foundation
awall chapter 6 . 6/22/2011
I am sad that it looks like this story will not be continued. This writer is skillful and I was eager to read more. I especially would like to see Ziva's reaction when she realizes Ducky is not trying to get her deported, he is trying to get her granted asylum.
Marcus Sylenus chapter 6 . 11/7/2009
This is very, very good, you should continue.
See Saw chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
I really liked this! I hope you share more stories with us!
poyopsoh chapter 6 . 8/5/2009
I am truly enjoying reading this, such amazing incorporation of action within your sentences. Wonderful story-telling )

...poor Ziva and Tony...(
poyopsoh chapter 4 . 8/5/2009
Plentiful full of drama, just like an episode has.

Such a sweet story!
poyopsoh chapter 3 . 8/5/2009
Such a captivating storyline. Very well written, smoothly.
Hokiegrl12 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Wow! Guess this is just your first published fanfic, and not your first story lol. I love your style of writing and can't wait to read more of this story D

lisbonloafers chapter 6 . 8/1/2009
I love that even though Ziva tried to kill him and everything that has happened, Tony was still petrified that Ziva was dead...true love i tell you..true love lol enough of my ramblings..update soon please
Viktorija chapter 6 . 8/1/2009
Well done!:)
scousemuz1k chapter 6 . 8/1/2009
I've been reading this story and really enjoying it, but never thought to review before. This is meant as a compliment: the story reminds me of a nightmare. You know, the sort of dream where you're running around like a loony trying to fix something, and you no sooner think you've dealt with one problem than another even worse appears, and you feel out of control. I'm glad Ziva didn't kill Tony, (I HATE character death stories) and that she realised he didn't deserve it. The way you had him accepting whatever she did sent shivers through me. Although the he/she hates me thing can be very contrived in some stories, I think you've got her state of mind just about right. I also like Ducky and Jordan's involvement; more of then please, and lots more Tony!
NickTonyK chapter 6 . 8/1/2009
Silvergrass chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
yah that was amaziing!
aislinnrae chapter 5 . 7/11/2009
This is wonderful so far. I hope you update soon.

I'm more one for slash, but Tony/Ziva has kinda wormed it's way in to my preferences. I really can't wait to see how you continue this.
Murgy31 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
This is great!
greeny-blue lights chapter 5 . 7/4/2009
Wow, loving this story. So, it is sorta like Aliyah, right?

Anyway, hope you update soon!
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