Reviews for Jewel of Darkness
Shay Blair chapter 18 . 10/16/2017
I've really enjoyed this story! I love AUs like this, where one small change affects so many things. I hope you update it at some point, I'd love to read more.
Garibaldi the Black chapter 18 . 12/4/2015
I like this story. The characters feel alive and dynamic, and the plot flows quite well.
There are some flaws, such as misspellings, wrong words, or missing letters. Nothing a good proofread can't fix!
I look forwards to the next installment to this story.
Ikkiki chapter 18 . 11/6/2015
Hey I was wondering if you are going to update this story anymore. It's a very good piece of work, with a clear plot and deep characters which people can accosicate with. This has got to be one of, if not the BEST Teen Titans story there is. I really enjoy the whole concept, which is pretty unique in itself, and I really like how Raven is not paired with anybody else. Please keep writing this story, as it is EXTREMELY well-written and I cannot tell you just how much the characters and their thoughts, feelings, and emotions, mean to me.
LilLinkGirl chapter 18 . 10/23/2015
Please tell me your coming back to this? I must know how things are going to play out.
sabrac1 chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
Veedramon chapter 2 . 11/13/2014
Visions, a pain in the tail and barely useful.
Veedramon chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
So, will Slade be as bad for her as he was for Terra or be more closer to a true parental figure?
shadowwriter01 chapter 6 . 9/8/2014
A very good story. The changes in the characters from canon are believable.
By my impression, Ravens greatest weakness here so far is that she is too stuck on her own p.o.v. and too quick to judge others.
One example is that she instantly dismissed Tim Drake as an "ignorant boy", while in truth she knew nothing about the entire situation, all that while Slade, in opposite to her, quickly figured out that Bruce Wayne was far more than he let show.
The situation with Slades riddle and his reaction to her anwer is also well portrait.

A short comment:
About the riddle, I think both Slade and Raven oversee one important aspect. I think a pragmatic and self serving person, as Slade had put it, would in fact spare the king, because he is the only one who can pardon him for the other two murders and would be able to give him a reward anyway. The rich man might maybe be able to offer him more, but since he would be probably on the run for murdering the king at this point, it would be very questionable if he would ever see anything of the money.
mac349 chapter 2 . 5/24/2014
This chapter is rather unusual as it considers Batman. A good portion of people forget about the Dark Night and Robin's relationship in the Teen Titans.
mac349 chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
This is a fascinating take on the path of Raven. Also, the poor guy, that decision was lose-lose. Although with a week of thought, I think my decision would have been to condemn my city for the world as "one cannot sit idly by while his fellow man is in danger" — Old Testament
TheGunmaster chapter 18 . 4/3/2014
This is a great story, looking forward to more!

This story is every bit as good as a "What if?" Or elseworlds Comic series.

Keep it up.
Wolfman217 chapter 14 . 2/21/2014
Brilliant :D

For some reason the scene at the end with Raven in the chamber really reminded me of Sidious and Vader, when Vader is getting fixed after Mustafar. Master and Apprentice, Darth Deathstroke and Darth Midnight.
BoutsofInsanity42 chapter 18 . 1/17/2014
I would have liked Raven to curbstomp Midnight. That was what I would have preferred. But then I like to see the Bad guys and Good guys constantly one upping each other with surprises. Where neither the good or evil guys are certain of victory. Here's hoping for more thrilling episodes of Jewel of Darkness.
tylermech66 chapter 18 . 1/5/2014
FINALLY! I can read this again! Though I was confused as to why she kept on insisting that her other self was still raised by slade, even though she was a good guy.
Patrick the observer chapter 18 . 12/29/2013
well then it seems things are really starting to get underway, here is hoping that we learn just what the White glove is (i think its this worlds version of the light). and I wonder just what Midnight is going to do now with the information she has gathered, should be interesting to find out. Hope you update this soon, till then I wish you luck in all your endeavors.
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