Reviews for Take the Deal
prissdoor chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Very clever answer to the opening scene of the pilot episode. I always wondered what prompted that incident in the subway. Now thanks to you and your neat little story, I have that answer to that and the riddle of Harley Gage is finally solved, too. Well done!
geezer chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
Very very good. Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Very nice story. I enjoyed your take of the pilot episode. I always wondered what the story was behind the subway scene and now because of your fine writing and imagination, I know. Thanks!
ermintrude421 chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
This is really good! Weaving in stuff from the series and also new stuff. It's a very good story, and you get the right note of disgust and despair McCall needs to quit. Hope there will be more stories!