|Reviews for A Twist of the world at hart|
| ivanganev1992 chapter 7 . 5/31/2016
With amnesia The RRB's as nice . I hope even if they remember who they were to remain caring.
| Tenebras Lux chapter 7 . 7/11/2011
Okay, so lets get it straight. To be honest, I think some parts of the story are a bit weird and random, but you've got quite a good story line :)
There are quite a lot of spelling and grammatical mistakes, and I think that perhaps you should proof read your work.
Also, to makes things easier to read, spell words the proper way, for example, ware (as in, ware is she?) should be spelt as where.
Overall, I think this story has a lot of potential, and I suggest you continue it. Everything has room for improvement! Keep going!
| Dragonblaze66 chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
awesome fic! Please continue!
| m chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
The thought that inspired this was obviously forged by Cthulhu himself
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/27/2010
make move of it! oh and bye.
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/26/2010
make move!make move and move move move move move!make move! make move ok and do you like pokemon well i have great pokemon cards ok bye.
| Snookie chapter 7 . 8/4/2010
Please Continue! This Story Is SO CUTE! D
| ShadowRainX chapter 2 . 5/28/2009
Its me again. I gotta tell ya, this fanfic you made is good. Though there are some mistakes, but nothings is perfect, ight? So, I give this chapter a 4.2/5