Reviews for Taking the Bait
Fanfiction Bard chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
Oh Hohenheim, you cheeky bastard!
paracuties chapter 2 . 4/23/2014

This is pretty hilarious. And Hughes is such a hypocrite.

Overall, I like it! The idea, I think, is more unique than the typical high school AUs. And this is actually enjoyable. Keep writing!
Sokkasm chapter 2 . 1/4/2014
Oh, this is an interesting au story. I liked Ed and Hohenheim's interaction in the previous chapter, then Ed and Hughes' in this one.
PalindromePen chapter 2 . 1/4/2014
Aha, this is awesome! :D
vanillavinegar chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Heeee. I think my favorite parts are the two sections with Hohenheim - the last one where he talks to Ed is flat-out hysterical. He's so easily embarrassed, and Hohenheim is so delighted to find this out... and then he gets his own revenge on Ed's behalf. Awwww.
SorainaSkye chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
Huh, I thought I'd already reviewed this- I guess not.

Well, I added it to my favs, because I think it was a really well done AU. Very much in character on all of them- Roy and everyone at the beginning made me laugh, and Hohenheim at the end is made of pure win. Plus the EdWinry hints, of course. :D
Orange Singer chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
HA ha ha! I love how he changed their grades down! This was hilarious.
Shadow Stalker7 chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
Awesome story. I loved the idea of it. Parts of the story made me laugh a lot, though I'd loved to have read the fight between Archer, Kimbly, Hughes, and Mustang. That would have been quite interesting. Anyways, great job :)

~Shadow Stalker~