|Reviews for Temper, Temper|
| aliasaurorasaccounthasmoved chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
The last line had me thinking in ellipses, no kidding. I was like, "..." and that was it. I couldn't decide what exactly it MEANT, you know? I guess that makes it memorable though, right, if it makes you stop and frown at your computer?
| Ishte chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Nice work. There is a formatting error in the second graph.
I think Edward will be hard pressed to grow out of his reactivity. Even as an adult, I think he'll sometimes catch himself reacting without thinking. Sometimes maybe he'll succeed at it, but I think occasionally it'll still happen.