Reviews for Bowl of Oranges
Grand Witch Alliance chapter 20 . 9/15/2016
I tried going through your other South of Nowhere fanfics but something just didn't really click with me for any of them. This was the only one I made past chapter 1 besides EHaIC. During my reading of EHaIC, I got bored and found it too unoriginal for my liking.

On the other hand, I think this story has the perfect blend of teen drama, excitement, angst, anxiety, etc. I got a bit mad when you went for the cliche "since this person doesn't have a partner, let's pair him/her up with the only one left available" for Noel/Fora. I didn't really care that they broke up after the fact; I was just initially mad when you decided to go that route in the first place.
Lord Asmodeus chapter 2 . 6/16/2014
I was hopelessly bored out of my mind...

God, Spencer was boring...

I'd never thought I would ever call Spencer boring...

But god I can't empathise with her...
oOYuuOo chapter 20 . 4/10/2013
It's an awesome story!

I really like it. Very well written and all.

Thank you for this story! :3
tiebandit chapter 20 . 3/8/2013
I began reading this story when you first started it almost four years ago. Now this is my third read through of it in the past four years and it still remains one of my favorite stories of all time. It's ridiculously funny, incredibly sad, and profoundly poignant all wrapped up in one amazing story. I just wanted to say that you did a really amazing job with it and I hope you keep writing more stories.
lawsbian chapter 12 . 1/3/2013
im crying this chapter is perfection
WhenAnxietyKicksIn chapter 11 . 9/8/2012
Totally warmed my cold heart
WhenAnxietyKicksIn chapter 10 . 9/8/2012
So good. Sorry I can only say shallow and obvious stuff.
WhenAnxietyKicksIn chapter 9 . 9/8/2012
I like how Ashley would ask Spencer if it's okay to hang with another girl. It seems something you'd do when you want the person you like to stop you from hanging out with another person. And I don't think Spencer is stupid for not realizing what is her feeling for Ashley. It's normally typical to justify what you feel. I like how she's slowly noticing Ashley and seeing the 'future' with her. This bit made me smile so thanks :)
WhenAnxietyKicksIn chapter 8 . 9/8/2012
You should have asked her out too, Spencer :p And now I'm talking to an imaginary character ;p
WhenAnxietyKicksIn chapter 5 . 9/7/2012
Leaving a message for someone who died is the hardest thing to do, painful even... Fora and Noel, I'm sensing, will be together soon-ish. Harley is adorable hogging Ashley to himself. And Arthur, what a surprise him being the (sort of) bad guy. Though I understand that this is an AU and it's a twist I'm interested knowing about.
WhenAnxietyKicksIn chapter 3 . 9/7/2012
Ohh a hug; a big dev't :D
WhenAnxietyKicksIn chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
I think I've read this story before or at least the first part but I never realized I haven't left a single review...I'm so ashamed, I apologize. I like how Spencer observes people around her. The analogy of salmon to hs is good though I think it can also represent life in general. Funny that Paula thinks of Spencer as irresponsible and that Spencer hates responsibilities (sort of). Ashley's shyness is adorable and her crushing on Spencer is something to look forward. The other characters you made: Harley, Fora and Noel are funky imho. Pretty diverge personalities but I think it works that they're connected with Spencer. I like the old casts (Glen, Aiden, Kyla, Chelsea etc) but AU characters like in this story are more interesting. Thanks for writing once again and Godspeed.
hollymarie4 chapter 20 . 10/8/2011
Wow, so I just sat here and read this story all in one sitting and it's been probably like 6 or 7 hours and it's 3:42am. I absolutely, positively loved this story. Every single thing about it, I loved it. It was so super amazing. The character development, the progression of their feelings, the laughter, the tears, just everything felt so perfectly combined and it all meshed together like no other story I have ever read.

I loved both Ashley and Spencer in this story and I also loved your original characters. It was so different than the normal Spashley stories that I couldn't stop reading.

I even loved Paula in this. And Ashley's mom. Wow, just wow. I'm not even sure what else I could say because I'm pretty sure that anything I say would not do this story justice. If that makes any sense.

I'll just leave it at that.

P.S. Hands down one of the best stories I have ever read. If you were to publish this, I'd buy one hundred copies.

P.P.S. I'm gonna read all your complete stories now and I only hope that you'll come back and finish the one's that are still "in progress" :)
TrulyUndecided chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Okay so I just started the first chapter and felt the need to review(before I even got half way through it). Your other story that I read was great and I have to say, this one is starting out superb. I actually laughed out loud to the alien reference(yes I'm a total dork, whats it to ya'?). Anyways, back to the story!
bluebird13 chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
You truly are an amazing author, I've enjoyed all of your stories so far.
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