Reviews for Your Heart Is An Empty Room
Rolling Stoned chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Anything but easy? How did that turn out to be Jakes fault? Bella is the one who ran away. Bella is the one who married a cold dead thing and still refused to let Jake go. Jake did the right thing right down the line. But Bella didnt want him to heal or move on. If it aint easy thats on Bellas head not Jakes
Bella deserves exactly what she got. A cold, dead, distant husband who treats her like a little pet. A husband that thinks she is incapable of taking care of herself. A husband mocks her judgement and intelligence and makes her feel weak and ugly. Thats what she couldnt live without. Jake owes her exactly what she gave him. NOTHING
Guest chapter 1 . 12/5/2014
And? Was there a plot in there? Maybe an actual story? If there was I missed it.
Maybe this is supposed to be profound?.. Its not its silly. More of the same. For some reason fgemale writers have a...need perhaps to see jake be weak to act in manner that he would not onsidering who and what he is. Basically they want Jake to be a male version of Bella and I never saw that. Loved Bella? Yeah he did. but he was 16 and as supernaturally powerful and beautiful as Dedward and a lot more personable. warm to. Guys like that dont spend years getting over a Bella of all people. A Bella is a disease, not something you wishyou had more of. You can wis things where different but guys like jake dont wish for more of selfish, sick wisted sefis Bella. They know people like that are a void. They can only take, neve give They will always be walking trainwrecks. Look how shallow Bellas relationship with corpse is The only good thing she mentions is looks. Never who he is. BElla wants. wants not to grow up, wants to take no chances wants to have no risk. she wants a zero sum existence. She is incapable literally of living life on its own terms it scares the shit out of her and that is damage to the soul that never gets better - it is a fundamental flaw in her. Bella does not give a shit for Dedward but what he can do for her. Bella can only feel for Bella.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
It aint Jakes fault it aint easy. Bella destroys everything she lays her eyes on. Turns it into utter ruin.

Anyway I want to tell you that sometimes the reviews are as entertaining as the story. I have to laugh when the dull eyed, slack jawed readers want to turn every one-shot piece of fic into an epic. they dont seem to get the concept of an essay piece.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
And the sad fact is there are many valid reasons for Jake to have those doubts...
awe.0 chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
please, please, please consider following this up. It is very beautiful...]
XxMidnightMoonxX chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
That was amazing i love it, it was brilliance
AwesomeFanfictionLover chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Haunting, bittersweet and sad.


I can't wait to read more.
hhecsi chapter 1 . 5/18/2009

is this just a one shot or is there going to be more? please say there's gonna be more!