Reviews for The Night Fate Intervened
HSBxoxo95 chapter 9 . 8/21/2010
I think this story is great and the plot is really interesting but I'm a little disappointed that there isn't any real dialogue like I know people are talking because the person is saying that this person said this and that but the dialogue it seems filtered so it's like you're not getting the real personality of the characters...is this making sense?
bundleb chapter 27 . 8/10/2010
AWESOME
Ness88 chapter 27 . 2/22/2010
very gd story luved it nessa .x.x.x.
twimom420 chapter 5 . 8/10/2009
Awesome Chapter... I hope she finds out soon about Jacob...
Marianka chapter 26 . 8/4/2009
Awesome.:)
Marianka chapter 25 . 8/4/2009
I love it.:)
Marianka chapter 23 . 8/4/2009
I like it.:)
Marianka chapter 21 . 8/4/2009
I like it.:)
Marianka chapter 18 . 8/4/2009
So cute and sweet.:)
Marianka chapter 13 . 8/4/2009
Really nice.:)
Marianka chapter 12 . 8/4/2009
Wow,really good.:)
Marianka chapter 8 . 8/4/2009
I like it.:)
Marianka chapter 5 . 8/4/2009
Really good.:)
Marianka chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
I like it.:)
x-AngelsEyes-x chapter 27 . 8/3/2009
great story but you need to set out your dialogue better, it was very confusing at times
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